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Formerly titled "Doormaking", this is the second draft of a story I posted here last spring. I think I've cleaned up and improved the text quite a bit, but as always, I'm interested in the harshest critiques you have to throw at me. Thanks for taking the time to read, and thanks even more if you take the time to give me some feedback.
*text redacted* This is out on submission.
Bonus question: How much do you think a frame narrative (perhaps with footnotes in the text and a short introduction or postscript) would add or take away to this piece?