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Unironically looking for critique/help with a comic (Concept updates on pg. 2)

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited October 2009
    Not usually, except maybe adjusting levels.

  • AnalrapistAnalrapist Registered User
    edited October 2009
    Nappuccino wrote: »
    Just say it was intentional and roll with it :)

    like I said, Allan Moore did that kind of thing, and its partly why he's so famous- deconstructing characters and whatnot.


    edit: also, my first thought was Cuthulu type minion, but that last panel screams zoidberg

    This.
    By the end of the strip I was reading it in a yiddish accent.
    But overall, I dig the work. It's cool.

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  • RubberACRubberAC Sidney BC!Registered User regular
    edited October 2009
    I think the sharp contrast is working pretty good actually
    definitely thought more cthulhu than zoidberg though but really i didn't think of either because i knew it was neither?
    I like it.

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  • FugitiveFugitive Registered User regular
    edited October 2009
    Crap I got so distracted with the crits I almost forgot.

    Squidbunny, Earthworm, Tynic, RubberAC, and Analrapist: Thank you very much for the kind words. I'm glad you could at least get some enjoyability out of these.

    I decided to do some inked drawings today and start working out another character design. I have no idea if these look stiff or not, I don't really trust my own eyes any more, so feedback is appreciated. Again these seem to have aliasing issues on these as well, but I have no idea how to fix it.

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    And Roy, mixing in some heavy Andy Helms influences for the sake of trying to get a handle on inking. I get the feeling the blacks make him read poorly.
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