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'Whomp!' June 6, 2011 "Heavy Petting"

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  • The Lovely BastardThe Lovely Bastard Registered User regular
    that is like

    a billion times better

  • The Lovely BastardThe Lovely Bastard Registered User regular
    now make an alternative that is just a picture of Spongebob flipping him off really really really hard

  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    that is like

    a billion times better

    Thank you. I like it too. I stuck it in a blog post as an alternative for anyone who cares. Then like 4 years down the line "Hey, remember that one strip? Man, did you read the ALTERNATE one?" "Alternate? OMGOMG GIMME"

  • exfauxsureexfauxsure Registered User
    I don't usually post anymore, but I love these comics. You've earned your spot on my list right between Fletcher and Polkster for my weekly readings. For the love of god keep it up!

  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    exfauxsure wrote: »
    I don't usually post anymore, but I love these comics. You've earned your spot on my list right between Fletcher and Polkster for my weekly readings. For the love of god keep it up!

    Haha, thank you. That's exactly the position I want to be in.

    Edit: On further thought: Mmm. Webcomics sandwich between Fletcher and Polkster. Giggity.

  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    Yet another early strip for my buddies in the AC.

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  • VeromVerom Registered User
    Not gonna lie, cringed a bit at the thought of sliding a BB around under my skin

  • MustangMustang Registered User regular
    These are definitely getting better, I've really enjoyed the last few.

    The gun down the pants is a great panel.

  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    As usual, thanks for the input guys! It really makes me enjoy what I do.

  • The Lovely BastardThe Lovely Bastard Registered User regular
    the only criticism I have is that you don't really need that little drop of blood

  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    the only criticism I have is that you don't really need that little drop of blood

    I'm real, son! I COME FROM THE STREETS.

    *Ronnie draws more blood around the hole.

    YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

    It's funny you mention it though. I have been shot subcutaneously before via BB and it was indeed blood-free.

  • The Lovely BastardThe Lovely Bastard Registered User regular
    you are not from the streets

    I am from the streets

    I will beat you up for claiming to be from the streets

    because I'm real

  • ParadiseParadise Registered User
    Don't mess with The Lovely Bastard.

    proof

  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    Paradise wrote: »
    Don't mess with The Lovely Bastard.

    proof

    That's a breath of fresh air. Never seen a Bronson film before, but I have seen a billion of these "If you kill him, you're no better than he is" crapfests. Can't a hero just destroy evil anymore? God wiped out most of the damn planet to get rid of evil assholes. I think we can shoot one guy who has murderaped a million babies.

  • The Lovely BastardThe Lovely Bastard Registered User regular
    the hell's the matter with you

    why you ain't seen no bronson movies

  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    the hell's the matter with you

    why you ain't seen no bronson movies

    Those were my stepdad's movies. Same reason I never liked Van Damme, Rambo, Rocky, or the Borg episodes of TNG.

  • The Lovely BastardThe Lovely Bastard Registered User regular
    so in other words

    you hate america

  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    It's-a Wednesday's strip!
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    Stay fresh!

  • The_Glad_HatterThe_Glad_Hatter Registered User regular
    i didn't recognize the monologue, but the comic clarified it sufficiently. good job.

    Also.. The thought of that subdermal BB-bullet is still freaking me out..
    it's like i can feel it...

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  • NappuccinoNappuccino Registered User regular
    Have you seen The Royal Tennenbaums? one of the cast members had a bb embeded in their hand so they wrote that attribute into a character (of course, the character was played by a different actor but the other one acted as a standin for the handshot)

    Rorus Raz wrote: »
    There's also the possibility you just can't really grow a bear like other guys.
    Spoiler:
  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    Nappuccino wrote: »
    Have you seen The Royal Tennenbaums? one of the cast members had a bb embeded in their hand so they wrote that attribute into a character (of course, the character was played by a different actor but the other one acted as a standin for the handshot)

    I do know of The Royal Tenenbaums, but I've never watched it all the way through (and didn't know about the BB part.) I did, however, get shot in the hand as a kid. I still have a little scar where they cut it out. It actually screwed up my ring finger somehow. It damaged a nerve or the cartilage or something, so now it locks down on occasion. It's super weird.

  • NappuccinoNappuccino Registered User regular
    I guess this guy was lucky- as far as i know he doesn't have any issues with his hand other than the BB that is still lodged in it.

    Rorus Raz wrote: »
    There's also the possibility you just can't really grow a bear like other guys.
    Spoiler:
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  • The_Glad_HatterThe_Glad_Hatter Registered User regular
    Main character's expressions are great. really getting a feel of his personality.
    The quiet cat terrorizing him seems like a great idea for a joke, really,but i think this one falls a bit short. Panel 6 was kinda confusing. an onlooker can barely "read" what the cat's doing... (what IS she doing? i thought she was popping a zit... : / )

    Those last 4 panels are great. nice pacing.

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  • bwaniebwanie Registered User regular
    also that cat looks like a pokemon

  • earthwormadamearthwormadam Registered User regular
    Having a panda at the table kinda takes away from the ludicrousness of having an evil cat eating at the table.

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  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    The reason panel six isn't obviously her pulling her fur open is every time I drew it, it looked like a hairy vagina. Argh.

    I guess I was being kind of ironic, in that Agrias could be so bold as to complain about one animal when there's another across the table from her. Explicitness might have helped there.

    Well, don't lose faith in me guys. Let's just look forward to Monday.

    Although I will admit, I love the way I drew Rumpy this time. My Rumpy from just 2.5 months ago was hoooooorrrrrible.

    Edit: And as usual, thank you for the input, all.

  • ParadiseParadise Registered User
    Ronnie, your sense of humor is bizarre, which is great. Every panel in this strip progresses the plot and reveals something about a character or a relationship between characters. Every panel cracks me up too.

    One little nitpick: the first panel makes it look like they're floating in space.

    Having a panda at the table kinda takes away from the ludicrousness of having an evil cat eating at the table.

    I dunno, it seems like Ronnie's life goes kind of like this: some crazy thing happens that Ronnie and the people around him must deal with, then another crazy thing happens that makes the first crazy thing seem less crazy by comparison.

  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    Paradise wrote: »
    One little nitpick: the first panel makes it look like they're floating in space.

    You're absolutely right! Thanks for your input. Gonna fix it now because I'm obsessive.

    Edit: And fixed.

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  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    Alternate title: I feel way too crappy today to have drawn something, but I did it anyway.

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    Edit: Fixed missing word in first bubble as per Whoopsie's mention.

  • Stupid Mr Whoopsie NameStupid Mr Whoopsie Name Registered User, ClubPA regular
    Missing word in the first panel's speech balloon.

    I love the reveal at the end. It's a nice little joke that keeps snowballing from about the 8th panel on. =D

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  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    Missing word in the first panel's speech balloon.

    I love the reveal at the end. It's a nice little joke that keeps snowballing from about the 8th panel on. =D

    Haha, thank you and oops on the word! It's easy to gloss over that. Fixing it right now.

  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
  • Stupid Mr Whoopsie NameStupid Mr Whoopsie Name Registered User, ClubPA regular
    Ha, yes! I like it!

    The only thing I'd offer to change is in the third panel, having the cat's face visible just because I'd want to see what you could do with the cat's reaction to being shoo'd away. I really like your expressions.

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  • MustangMustang Registered User regular
    Both the cat comics on this page are great, you're really hitting your stride Ronnie.

  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    Thank you both so much! I was really happy with this one. And you're right, SMWN, I should have done a perspective shot on the cat where he's jumping at the viewer. I love doing perspective shots~

  • The_Glad_HatterThe_Glad_Hatter Registered User regular
    last panel = priceless

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  • ParadiseParadise Registered User
    Man, you're on a roll.

  • rfilyawrfilyaw Registered User regular
    Alrighty, tomorrow's comic up early for the nice people of the AC, always open to criticism for use in future comics!

    Warning: Has a gross looking sore, if that bothers you.
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