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Serial Webcomic! [GWH] Second-String Superheroes
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Alright, so I know I'm not allowed to just advertise here, so I thought I would just show off some pages of a new serial webcomic that some friends and I wrote/drew. I think it looks pretty excellent, but I want some opinions and some shameless plugging:
Here's the first two pages -- one a mindless introduction page, and the second is where the real chapter begins:
The pages, for the most part, will be mostly black-and-white though, except for very special occasions (such as this page and our most recently uploaded page).
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Here's the first two pages -- one a mindless introduction page, and the second is where the real chapter begins:
The pages, for the most part, will be mostly black-and-white though, except for very special occasions (such as this page and our most recently uploaded page).
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Some immediate concerns:
-I can't read your text (too small+unreadable handwriting/font).
-Everything is way too dark or way too light in all the wrong places.
-characters seem very flat, title card characters seem like hobbits in proportion.