Abbey View Nightmare- first page.

Ronin356

This is some else's webcomic, who I have use their script with their permission for practice. It used corell painter 12 and photoshop. I know this forum can be brutally honest. I respect it's candor.


Thanks for looking. I'm going to do more pages in the future for practice.
Thomas 8-)

Mustang

I would prefer to see your sketch work. It's really hard to determine where you are at from this, but if I must I would advise that you take a huge step back and work on some simple still life art. A ball, an apple, etc. Sketch or colour would be fine, some like to separate the two subjects but plenty have tackled them at the same time. Either way you've thrown yourself too far into the deep end with the subject matter, and sheer will alone won't get you out.

Ronin356

This is the most current figure drawing that I have.
Hope this helps.

Mustang

Hmmm, If I were you I would try focusing on individual body parts at the moment. Hands, Ears, Eyes, Lips etc
Draw 20 to a page, using different references to each one. Always use references at the moment, you need to build a database in your head of how the body moves and acts. It's a never ending task, but you're just past the starting blocks and need to kick it in the pants right now so you can get to doing more advanced, and let's face it, fun stuff. That being said, those huge moments when you finally 'get' something and make that big leap in progress are the fucking best.