Personface Critique Hour

Personface

Spoiler:

Critique desired, in the hope that improvement is but a post away!

Enc

Is #6 Tash from CS Lewis?

tynic

I like your colours, and you have some great flow to your linework.

I feel like your underlying structures could use some attention. There's a lot of skewing and a lack of balance in many of the drawings, which would be helped by more careful work in the planning stages.

Personface

@Tynic Yes, a number of them are seriously lopsided, or drifting off the page. I think that's probably because most of them are basically rampant, overgrown doodles, and I really need to do more solidly planned work.

@Enc In retrospect, that could be Tash, but I wasn't trying to depict him. And having said that, I think doing some Narnia work would be an interesting project, so thank you.

Kendeathwalker

You would benefit greatly from doing a few cast drawings.