The Art and Aesthetic Value of Metroid Prime (Term Paper Critique)

JackKieser

So, wasn't sure where to post this exactly, but I figured since this is a philosophy paper and I'm making an argument in it, it'd be a good place. So, here's the setup. I just finished writing my most-likely mostly-final draft of my Aesthetics term paper about art and Metroid Prime. It clocks in at just about 17 full pages, not including bib and appendix (total, about 22).

What I'm looking for is a general critical eye. Sure, if you see grammatical errors, please let me know, but I think I got most of them. I'd just generally like a critique about composition: does it flow well, is the argument understandable, do I ramble in some parts, anything need trimming? Really, anything constructive works. Thanks in advance, and I hope you guys like it; I tried to be as seriously academic as I could.

Oh, and since it's so long, I'm not posting it inline; it's going to be a Word 2010 .doc file I'm hosting on Mediafire. Link below. Thank you all again in advance. ^_^

http://www.mediafire.com/?nrdbpad9gm9jzo9

ceres

This is a little too close to doing your homework. These are things that you need to discuss with your professor or go through and decide on your own.