Big Picture Help.

Pious

This is for a T-shirt radio contest. I don't know how to make this a better, is it too symmetrical? Bad concept all together? Sorry about the water mark but this is a contest and I don't know who all lives in the same state.Just need your input.

Grifter

You realize that just because it needs to be submitted at that size doesn't mean that you have to show us the same huge size, right?

Pious

Sorry I don't know why I wasn't thinking.

Blankspace

Pious wrote: »

This is for a T-shirt radio contest. I don't know how to make this a better, is it too symmetrical? Bad concept all together? Sorry about the water mark but this is a contest and I don't know who all lives in the same state.Just need your input.

Woah! I occasionally listen to the Edge. Nice shirt, me likey.

Godfather

Maybe if that print was on the back, but I wouldn't wear it on the front.
I could be off on this whole thing.

It really depends on how you're going to organize the logo. Give us some examples as to what it would look like on the shirt rather than just the vector design.

Pious

Godfather wrote: »

Maybe if that print was on the back, but I wouldn't wear it on the front.
I could be off on this whole thing.

It really depends on how you're going to organize the logo. Give us some examples as to what it would look like on the shirt rather than just the vector design.

I don't put it on the shirt myself. But I know what your worried about. Like how well it acctually looks like on a shirt. And I have no idea. Maybe though, its a little to long.

Edit:


Ok, two changes, shorter and different color. I forgot to change it to black and white. I didn't intend for it to be red.

Oh, and I read the rules, I need my signature on that.

Epi

The different font between the "z-104.5" and "the edge" slightly bother me. And I feel like the outline curves should cup more symmetrically around the mini vinyls, but that could be me just being a picky bitch

Godfather

Well if you have no say in where the logo goes then there's not much you can do. Your best bet here is to make a logo that any Joe Sixpack could slap on a shirt AND have it work pretty much anywhere, regardless of wherever the hell he sticks it.

Right now it could work as a decent back decal, but for a front design it's just too much. Remember, some of the best t-shirt/logo designs are the most simplistic; showcase the message without being too in-your-face. If the viewer can figure out the meaning on his own, you've done your part.

Pious

Epi wrote: »

The different font between the "z-104.5" and "the edge" slightly bother me. And I feel like the outline curves should cup more symmetrically around the mini vinyls, but that could be me just being a picky bitch

I can't change the font. They made it. I guess there is not much left for me too do with it now. I'll try to be more simplistic in the future. I know what you mean by it but I'm just having trouble getting out of the habit.

The rules can be found at www.edgetulsa.com. I'm kinda stuck with it now. Thanks all!

MagicToaster

Everything is so clean, but then you get to the vynil and it's all blurry. It's the only thing I don't like.

Also the Z-104.5... i'd position it someplace else. There's so much empty, unbalanced space to its right.

Pious

MagicToaster wrote: »

Everything is so clean, but then you get to the vynil and it's all blurry. It's the only thing I don't like.

Also the Z-104.5... i'd position it someplace else. There's so much empty, unbalanced space to its right.

I see what you mean, I'm sorry though, I already had to submit after those tweaks and a little more that I didn't bother to show. Whats good though is when I read the rules is that they can do whatever they hell they want with it to change it, so if they see the same prob, they will probobly fix it.

Then again to my understanding they will only tinker with it if I win the blasted thing. Hell I'm just screwed all together for acting pre-maturly.