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My first CG vehicle

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    ADPADP Registered User regular
    edited January 2012
    My comic in full 3D? Maybe...

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    UnknownSaintUnknownSaint Kasyn Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Eyelids. Please.

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    DavoidDavoid Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    That's one thing that really bugs me about your drawings of people, not only are they rigid, but without eyelids, they aren't expressive in the least. They're just spooky looking.

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    GrifterGrifter BermudaModerator mod
    edited May 2007
    Reminds me of Data from Star Trek only with a funny looking future hat on that defies gravity. Is that what you were creating? I hope you're not sinking too much money into this whole book deal thing cuz I'm pretty sure you're going to lose any money that you spend on it.

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    HashyHashy Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    No-one is going to buy your book and if you want critiques on your 3d character (somehow I don't think you do) then you should post a wireframe or something. From what I can tell the geometry is really weak around the chin area and it's not really built correctly. You should really consider touching on more traditional character modelling techniques before trying to recreate your style if you intend to have even remotely flexible models, but then you should have had a grounding in traditional art before attempting to assemble your comic empire in the first place.

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    ADPADP Registered User regular
    edited January 2012
    I’ve taken all this feedback into consideration...

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    UnknownSaintUnknownSaint Kasyn Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    I still hate the eyes. Even with the eyelids you put there, they are football shaped and your characters still retain their pedo-stare.

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    HashyHashy Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Haha wait wait wait you didn't post this

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    UnknownSaintUnknownSaint Kasyn Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    It's gold Jerry, GOLD.

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    MaydayMayday Cutting edge goblin tech Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Oh jeez.

    Is this fo' realz?

    Why would anyone do that?

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    DavoidDavoid Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    This here is indication that you need to work on basic anatomy before you start doing 3d models:

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    MaydayMayday Cutting edge goblin tech Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
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    This thread should be stickied.

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    Kewop DecamKewop Decam Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    lol, oh man.

    Stop trying to stylize what you do not know. You can't develop a style of writing without knowing how to write and you can't create a cartoon style without knowing how to draw the object.

    We tell you shit, and then you go off into "Do What the Fuck I Want" Land. You can't make a face in 3d if you don't understand what a face is even made up of. Go to the Questions thread's first page and start clicking those damn links. It won't make you a superstar, but you need to start somewhere.

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    Spectre-xSpectre-x Rating: AWESOME YESRegistered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Relevant once more!

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    Mr.BrickMr.Brick Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Yeah he for sure needs some understanding of the human anatomy.

    And for your 3d heads there- if you have any plans of making them move, you really need to learn about edge loops.

    www.cgtalk.com

    use the search function.
    read and practice.

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    MagicToasterMagicToaster JapanRegistered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Did we crush his soul? I'm pretty sure he's got something to say about this.

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    GrifterGrifter BermudaModerator mod
    edited May 2007
    I think we're going to have to wait for the next podcast that he'll edit after we tell him he's an idiot again.

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    bread of wonderbread of wonder Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    I have neglected to post in this thread. But now I will.

    Ok, your comic is fucking genius. Especially the anatomy. Your subtle genius is just too much for these misinformed idiots to comprehend and appreciate, and your podcast is the best thing the internet has to offer. Don't listen to these fools, they will only drag you down! Stay true to your ideals (and creepy wide-eyed protagonists!) and your comic will go far. Infact, come next year and this thing will be bigger than PA.
    I think this is what he came here to hear ;-)

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    Long distance runner, what you standin' there for?
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    MagicToasterMagicToaster JapanRegistered User regular
    edited May 2007
    I wonder how many ppl Pennywise can hump before this thread gets locked...

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    One....

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    two...

    EDIT:

    C'mon everyone, join the fun!

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    OverlordOverlord Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Nice, MagicToaster, Nice

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    DavoidDavoid Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Maybe humping this guy?

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    The_RatThe_Rat Seattle, WARegistered User regular
    edited May 2007
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    Just thought I'd throw that out there.

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    HashyHashy Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
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    UnknownSaintUnknownSaint Kasyn Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Hashy wins at life.

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    MaydayMayday Cutting edge goblin tech Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    I wonder how many ppl Pennywise can hump before this thread gets locked...
    One....

    AAAUGH!! Get it off me, get it off me!

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    Anthrax! Please.Anthrax! Please. Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Mayday wrote: »
    Whatever happened to that Redmask comic? I think I'm gonna do a search for it.
    EDIT: FYI http://www.redmask-comics.com/1-1.html

    Ha ha yeah. Man, I just re-read that comic and man is it great. Can we use this thread to talk about how great Red Mask is?

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    MaydayMayday Cutting edge goblin tech Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    I don't see why not... as long as the discussion involves tiny heads.

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    Kewop DecamKewop Decam Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Hashy wrote: »
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    This REALLY made me laugh.

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    GrifterGrifter BermudaModerator mod
    edited May 2007
    OK, this thread has gotten enough attention. Time to move on to something else.

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