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Horny Girls (nsfw)

McGibsMcGibs Registered User regular
edited June 2008 in Artist's Corner
fufufufufu

I wanted to make a cool wall poster for my room.
And nothing says 21 year old nerd like a nude demoness with a gorget.
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Detail
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And a squishy floater. Because I was bored.
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McGibs on

Posts

  • MitsuhideMitsuhide Registered User
    edited May 2008
  • jibjibjibjib Registered User
    edited May 2008
    What are the dimensions of the first one?

  • BelieveBelieve Registered User
    edited May 2008
    The bright red hurts my eyes! I mean that literally, not in a rudely-joking way.

    It didn't catch my eye at first but... now that I'm looking at it there's something odd about the line going down her stomach. How it curves to our right and then back to our left as it goes down. I get the feeling it shouldn't do that so much. Are you trying to show her stomach is totally flat/goes inward a little? Because at her stance I think it should be going down a bit straighter, or even curve a little to our left. The shield blocking off part of her hip may be throwing me off, though.

  • wakkawawakkawa Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    I really like the red background on that one. And the way it kinda reflects around the figure.

    I would have to agree on the stomach though. Probably should hit up some refs for that.

  • edited May 2008
    You know man ... ive been seeing your stuff now on and off for a few years and what always makes me smile is that you never forget to toss in some extra details ... i love your armor etchings etc

    Captain K wrote:
    So yeah, that's pretty much the sketchiest train of thought I've ever seen committed to text on the PA forums.
  • GodfatherGodfather Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Is it just me or does girl no. 2 look a bit cross eyed?

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  • icebergiceberg Registered User
    edited May 2008
    I commend you for your use of red. A breath of fresh air, if you ask me.


    (and the 2nd girl does look a tad cross-eyed)

  • McGibsMcGibs Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    Thanks for the crits guys. Fix'd the stomach on the 1st one and tweaked the sheild a bit.

    I cant for the life of me see how the 2nd is crosseyed. Unless you dont see the red as her pupils.
    Her eyes are pretty slanted though, ill give you that.

  • ruzkinruzkin Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    McGibs - the first poster is rad. Any chance of you letting the hi-res file out to play so I too can adorn my bedroom?

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  • icebergiceberg Registered User
    edited May 2008
    Something to do with her left (our right) eye. White space is currently on the right and in conjunction with the other eye having white space on the left, gives the feeling like she's trying to cross her eyes. Maybe just try tweaking the position of that white space from the right to the left (near the bridge of nose instead of away) or filling it with the gray iris or something.

    I hope that makes sense.

  • JP DynoJP Dyno Registered User
    edited May 2008
    that second one has serious booty. i love it.

  • edited May 2008
    I didnt see the crosseyed part at first but I understand now ...

    Her right eye ... the one to the viewers left is looking more or less straight ahead based on the position of the red dot ...

    but her left eye ... to the viewers right ... is looking down and to her right ... based on the curve of the eye and the position of her face the pupil should be on the outside edge of the eye and there shouldnt be any white space between the edge and the pupil ...

    in this position both eyes should not be drawn the same in that her right eyes pupil should be surrounded in white as it is more directly looking at the viewer where as her left eye is curved at an angle that should only display white on the inner side ...

    if that makes sense ...

    blah ... simply put .. if you move the red dot to the right a bit youll see the difference

    Captain K wrote:
    So yeah, that's pretty much the sketchiest train of thought I've ever seen committed to text on the PA forums.
  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    I approve, and love your love of women.

    STRONGHOLD. THE WEBCOMIC. Monday - Friday
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  • Whiniest Man On EarthWhiniest Man On Earth Registered User
    edited May 2008
    These are really stylish, I like them a lot.

    Am I alone in thinking that the top line of the shield is a little off?

  • TamTam I hate art I love artRegistered User regular
    edited May 2008
    McGibs, post the Mekkanik.


    Yes, in this thread.

  • vrempirevrempire Registered User
    edited May 2008
    Woooww!! that's really cool dude. I love to look at the horn than the nip at the pic.
    Nice to be HORNy :)

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  • DSilDSil Registered User
    edited May 2008
    Dang! Well, to my untrained eye, it looks like you've got a good sense of anatomy, and the body forms look solid and three-dimensionally plausible. I LOVE the reflected red light on the body and shield in the top one. That subtle touch really makes her fit into the scene.


    ....wow, I just got the title... I am dumb.

  • winter_combat_knightwinter_combat_knight Registered User regular
    edited May 2008
    I think this will look really cool when printed out. I wouldnt have even thought to use red for the bg but i think it works well.

  • RaslinRaslin Registered User regular
    edited June 2008
    I love you and everything you do McGibs

    <3

    I cant url good so add me on steam anyways steamcommunity.com/id/Raslin

    3ds friend code: 2981-6032-4118
  • u63ru63r Jon "Bad Wasabi" Wood Registered User regular
    edited June 2008
    That's going to be hard to explain to the ladies. ;)

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