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So, I just finished editing one of my books. I printed it off and started deciding which sample chapters to send out and all I have to say is, "man, this could use some editing."
So, I just finished editing one of my books. I printed it off and started deciding which sample chapters to send out and all I have to say is, "man, this could use some editing."
Sigh.
Send a sample my way. I am interested to have a look.
Mainly because I too always feel my work needs constant editing over and over.
Just a small snippet, if you haven't already posted some elsewhere and I have missed it.
I want to steal all your ideas.
haha just kidding.
I want to steal some, im not greedy.
Spoiler:
seriously though, im always game for a healthy critique
So, I just finished editing one of my books. I printed it off and started deciding which sample chapters to send out and all I have to say is, "man, this could use some editing."
Sigh.
Send a sample my way. I am interested to have a look.
Mainly because I too always feel my work needs constant editing over and over.
Just a small snippet, if you haven't already posted some elsewhere and I have missed it.
I want to steal all your ideas.
haha just kidding.
I want to steal some, im not greedy.
Spoiler:
seriously though, im always game for a healthy critique
Nah, it's not major plot flaws or anything like that. It's stupid shit like capitalizing both the I and the T at the beginning of a sentence or leaving a word out. Stuff like that that I had missed while inputting my rewrite (I rewrote on a typewriter and then typed it back into a computer, so these are mostly typing errors). No biggie, I just need a couple of weekends to get it done.
Seriously, thanks though. Hopefully I'll be done with it cleaning up my next book and then I'll have something fresh for you folks.
A) Self-enforce the obsolete "100 pages per thread" rule
B) Decide upon the new thread title by consensus
C) Politely wait for someone to start the new thread
D) Immediately abandon the old thread before it's locked
Hell, we're the only forum that has a dedicated "sitewhore your shitty comic" thread to save moderators the mild inconvenience of browsing the thread titles every week or so.
Yes Brink, this is designed to make you feel guilty for abandoning us for a paying job.
Really? They transfer you to the "Awesome ideas and writing" division, or did you get a pink internal memo?
EDIT:
Also, someone who has been keeping up with all this Dragon Age stuff and doesn't mind wading through a thread full of vitriol and no actual discussion: What was up with the announcement today?
Far less writing, in fact; I'm such a sell out. My writing now is absolute rubbish. I'm Associate Producer for my game. The first bullet point on my to do list is to hire a dude to do what was I doing.
...speaking of which, if any of you assholes live in socal and have any type of forum moderating or game industry experience....let me know
A passenger had way too much pride,
The coach folks would not step aside,
I'll do it my way he thunk,
My excuse is I'm drunk,
I'll just exit the plane on the left slide.
Posts
Get out
Double banned.
Sigh.
Ryan M Long Photography
Buy my Prints!
Send a sample my way. I am interested to have a look.
Mainly because I too always feel my work needs constant editing over and over.
Just a small snippet, if you haven't already posted some elsewhere and I have missed it.
I want to steal all your ideas.
haha just kidding.
I want to steal some, im not greedy.
i was worried after the last one's uncertain start, but this feels like WB
BEADS?
I-Dogg has mah back.
Fist pound!
Ima goan work on my lats now
Nah, it's not major plot flaws or anything like that. It's stupid shit like capitalizing both the I and the T at the beginning of a sentence or leaving a word out. Stuff like that that I had missed while inputting my rewrite (I rewrote on a typewriter and then typed it back into a computer, so these are mostly typing errors). No biggie, I just need a couple of weekends to get it done.
Seriously, thanks though. Hopefully I'll be done with it cleaning up my next book and then I'll have something fresh for you folks.
Ryan M Long Photography
Buy my Prints!
boosh
I gotta say, bitchin'
including clown puns.
Alright. Ill work something up over breakfast.
Holy fucking shit its 6:15 am
Did you know... before the war... I was an amateur boxer?
...gurgle.
That's only five words. you fail sir. FAIL.
Edit: wait shit wrong thread. man I seriously need to go to sleep.
You could be too but that ship sailed, babe.
A) Self-enforce the obsolete "100 pages per thread" rule
B) Decide upon the new thread title by consensus
C) Politely wait for someone to start the new thread
D) Immediately abandon the old thread before it's locked
SE would be ashamed.
You know, I bet they dont even pay attention to this place, hence the 'you've gotten weird'
We could turn this place into a porn dungeon or some kind of inkblot fetish site and noone would even notice.
Not that Im advocating either of those, though this post does reinforce the aforementioned 'weirdness' issue.
Now I'm not going to lock it. Let's see who the asshole is.
PAGINA DOS
Pretty much.
Yes Brink, this is designed to make you feel guilty for abandoning us for a paying job.
EDIT:
Also, someone who has been keeping up with all this Dragon Age stuff and doesn't mind wading through a thread full of vitriol and no actual discussion: What was up with the announcement today?
...speaking of which, if any of you assholes live in socal and have any type of forum moderating or game industry experience....let me know
Like "Will these TIGHTEN UP guys like me? Should I do my hair first?"
also dear wb I have found a website on the internet
I was surprised too
I can think of a number of people what would find this useful
neat
natty
peachy-keen
Also, where the hell is Raziel
Also, I believe that Dragon Age has a trailer appearing at 1am on Friday
Also, takyris, why haven't you gone insane and killed 80% of all gaming forums yet no jury would convict you