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  • Slowly Playing BassSlowly Playing Bass Registered User
    edited November 2006
    Lly wrote:
    update:
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    It looks to me like the top right of his head is bulged out. Unless it's meant to be that way. :oops:

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  • MaydayMayday generation three hybrid Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    Crit me like we're both 16 again!

    Nroster.jpg

    For those of you who are wondering why am I posting such a similiar mesh after so many months: I lost the original and had to rebuild it. I also hope I made it look a bit better.

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  • FantasyrogueFantasyrogue Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    I like that Mayday, the only thing that scares me is his ability to turn his eye completely sideways in his socket (in the profile shot). That looks like it might be uncomfortable.

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  • LlyLly Registered User
    edited November 2006
    Lly wrote:
    Hehe you haven't offended me (why would you have?). I definitely see what you are saying about the finger. The boob i am less sure about ... but will definitely try out your version. Also your version looks much cuter than mine which is frustrating!

    Thanks for helping :)

    actually lilly the problem with the boobs isn't the shape. her left one is just too far to the back of her rib cage. Her back extends too far back and the shoulder isn't really attached right.

    The back extending too far back (heh) is also what makes the hips look too narrow.

    I also think her left eye is pushed a little to far back on her face which skews the head. the problem being the left side of her face (eye, eyebrow, mouth and ear) doesn't match the perspective and shape you've got going on her right side.

    It's hard to explain. I can do a draw over of what I mean if its not clear.

    a drawover would be most helpful, if you have the time. < 3

    It looks to me like the top right of his head is bulged out. Unless it's meant to be that way. :oops:

    The lines weren't done by me. I'm just colouring them as a fan service to earthworm! So shh. his lines are great!

    Lly on
  • GreatnationGreatnation Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    Lly, there is a ton of space in between her eyes that looks weird, and the lighting on her face is pretty inconsistant (unless she is supposed to be cow speckled in skin tone)

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  • RavenshadowRavenshadow Registered User
    edited November 2006
    Lly, there is a ton of space in between her eyes that looks weird, and the lighting on her face is pretty inconsistant (unless she is supposed to be cow speckled in skin tone)

    I think it's supposed to be camouflage body paint.

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    That's why I like the AC. Just the right combination of stupid butt-fuckery and verbal masturbation to suit my needs.
  • LlyLly Registered User
    edited November 2006
    Lly, there is a ton of space in between her eyes that looks weird, and the lighting on her face is pretty inconsistant (unless she is supposed to be cow speckled in skin tone)

    noted.

    I have real trouble doing cel style shading so i thought i would try it again. Guess i need to rethink it.

    Lly on
  • MaydayMayday generation three hybrid Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    More critz plz

    Mayday on
  • EhmaviscaEhmavisca Registered User
    edited November 2006
    Looks awesome to me.

    WIP on self-portrait for CA.org. You guys should check it out: Set a Record

    selfwip1.jpg

    Crits, please. :)

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  • MaydayMayday generation three hybrid Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    Oh my. Those cracks look really cool.

    I think the nose is too... thin? Ah! And the line under the nose (between the holes) shouldn't be there, since we're looking at it from below.

    Post updates on it plz!

    Mayday on
  • MagicToasterMagicToaster JapanRegistered User regular
    edited November 2006
    Crap! All you guys are amazing!

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  • RavenshadowRavenshadow Registered User
    edited November 2006
    Lly: I did a draw over of what I thought would help. Mainly I realigned the shoulder, moved the breast, straightened out the waist, changed the curve on the hips, changed the jawline, curved the top of the forehead and moved the eye.

    These were the kinds of things that jumped out at me. You're drawing is still pretty decent, it just took some small tweaks, and I'm no wakka or bacon or anything so take these as you will.
    spacebitch2-2.jpg

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    That's why I like the AC. Just the right combination of stupid butt-fuckery and verbal masturbation to suit my needs.
  • TamTam Le Buggeur Risible Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    Since my thread's just being bumped down, perhaps the doodle thread will save me:

    Okay, so my school's Mu Alpha Theta (Math Club) fell short of t-shirt design submissions this year, so they wanted me to do one. Only thing is, they gave me a really shitty time frame- so now I have to submit it tomorrow.

    I've got to work on a school newspaper comic as well, so I might only be able to do quick fixes, but anything will help. Oh, and please excuse my inability to come up with anything near a decent motto (they can modify that anyway).

    EugenePoindexter.jpg

    Tam on
  • EhmaviscaEhmavisca Registered User
    edited November 2006
    Really nice inks man, looks great to me.

    Sorry I'm no help!

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  • TamTam Le Buggeur Risible Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    Well, I've got to email it to them in about 20 minutes, so it looks like you're the only feedback I got, Frank. Thanksamillion, man. Now I can be confident in the inking.

    Tam on
  • NeoRedXIIINeoRedXIII Registered User
    edited November 2006
    everythingminesketchst1.jpg

    Progress on another design project. Using text as the general basis of the image.

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  • wakkawawakkawa Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    for that self portrait thing
    canwegettogether.jpg

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  • SublimusSublimus AustinRegistered User regular
    edited November 2006
    Gah! If I wasnt going to be up all night painting for class, I would SOOO get in on that!

    Anywho. An in-class sketch. Some sort of hip grim, i guess.


    grim.jpg

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  • Angel_of_BaconAngel_of_Bacon Moderator mod
    edited November 2006
    BULLSHIT \/
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  • -SPI--SPI- Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    I need to set up some kind of easel. I miss my paint. :(

    Anyhow. Self portrait.

    1copyxr5.jpg

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  • CatnipCatCatnipCat Registered User
    edited November 2006
    It was cold in class. Holiday wishes and cupcake gumdrops for all!!

    Holidays.jpg

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    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
  • Mr. FahrenheitMr. Fahrenheit Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    Lightmusic2.jpg

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  • RavenshadowRavenshadow Registered User
    edited November 2006
    I don't get it

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    That's why I like the AC. Just the right combination of stupid butt-fuckery and verbal masturbation to suit my needs.
  • LlyLly Registered User
    edited November 2006
    SPI, AOB, Sub, Wakka and neo ... coool stuff.

    And yeah, mr fahrenheit what is it?

    Lly on
  • GolemGolem of Sand Saint Joseph, MORegistered User regular
    edited November 2006
    Lightsaber and violin, obviously a pic from the Jedi Academy

    Golem on
  • PenguinoPenguino Registered User
    edited November 2006
    It's a violin, that's played by a lightsaber...Am I right? :)

    Edit> Bah, Golem

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  • BuckwolfeBuckwolfe Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    I have a short attention span...


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  • RavenshadowRavenshadow Registered User
    edited November 2006
    I'm not a big fan of the way you draw people. But I really do like your monsters

    :^: :^:

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    That's why I like the AC. Just the right combination of stupid butt-fuckery and verbal masturbation to suit my needs.
  • BuckwolfeBuckwolfe Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    Well you can't please everybody. I'm really more of an aquired tasteRazz.gif

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  • Mr. FahrenheitMr. Fahrenheit Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    The viosaber was just a picture that I took. I didn't feel that it belonged in the photo thread, partly because I changed so much of it in the Gimp. I don't want it to look like I slapped a filter on it, which I didn't. Also I just like lightsabers and I play the violin.

    If a photo doesn't belong here I'll take care if it asap.

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  • Ape2001Ape2001 Otaku Registered User
    edited November 2006
    Omg, the thought that the caterpillar looks pretty much phallus-like snook into my brain ;_;
    The squid thing looks awesome. I'm especially impressed by the colours ^^!

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  • TheBogTheBog Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    YES! Here's my chance!
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  • RavenshadowRavenshadow Registered User
    edited November 2006
    The viosaber was just a picture that I took. I didn't feel that it belonged in the photo thread, partly because I changed so much of it in the Gimp. I don't want it to look like I slapped a filter on it, which I didn't. Also I just like lightsabers and I play the violin.

    If a photo doesn't belong here I'll take care if it asap.

    photo's are fine. I just couldn't figure what was going on in that picture that 'sall.

    The doodle thread is for fucking around so there's no reason you shouldn't post it here.

    Ravenshadow on
    That's why I like the AC. Just the right combination of stupid butt-fuckery and verbal masturbation to suit my needs.
  • Ape2001Ape2001 Otaku Registered User
    edited November 2006
    Oh my, Lovecraft audio books rawk:

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    Coal for my fire of imagination o_o

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    - SF42012 Gen replays and anime trailers http://www.youtube.com/user/derBene
    - great animation focused website http://www.catsuka.com
  • HashyHashy Registered User
    edited November 2006
    Mayday, the heshen (?) fabric looks damn good but it seems as though we can only see the closest layer, and not the other through the holes in it (the normals aren't facing us). Nice renders.

    Angel_of_bacon, I really enjoy that piece. Expressive and well balanced stance plus believable and interesting armor, great stuff as usual :^:

    Hashy on
    :winky:
  • GreatnationGreatnation Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    i fucking hate my scanner.


    scanfuck.jpg

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  • VirumVirum Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    Blargh. I've been having trouble drawing lately.

    Anyways, I spent only 10 minutes on the girl on the right, 30 on the girl on the left. The thing around her neck is supposed to be a necklace but it doesn't really look like one.

    11.02.06.jpg

    Crits welcome as always....

    Greatnation: I like it, but her eyes seem too high up and it doesn't look like planned out the legs, the skirt becomes very flat in my eyes.

    Bacon: Goddammit, I wish you'd post more 2d doodles.

    Virum on
  • RubberACRubberAC Sidney BC!Registered User regular
    edited November 2006
    Ape2001 wrote:
    Omg, the thought that the caterpillar looks pretty much phallus-like snook into my brain ;_;
    The squid thing looks awesome. I'm especially impressed by the colours ^^!

    you need to check out more of buck's stuff.
    theres more than just penisheads.
    in regards to the actual drawing: Rad.

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  • Ape2001Ape2001 Otaku Registered User
    edited November 2006
    rad: /signed ^^

    But Buckwolfe seems to tend to not finish lots of stuff, like me, unfortunately ^^'

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  • AximAxim Registered User
    edited November 2006
    man what an act to follow up there great stuff guys

    just playing around in painter..
    endoftime_rev2-1.jpg

    edit - NOW WITH COLOUR UNH UNH
    edit - fixed head?

    Axim on
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