AC Challenge Thread 15: Gams 'n Garters [VOTE] [NSFW]

Fugitive

Metalbourne wrote: »

Angel_of_Bacon wrote: »

Posting a tiny WIP shot just to prove I'm not a liar.

Spoiler:

Hands suck horribly, face kinda sucks, don't like the boots....a lot wrong with it, really. Lots of ham-handed treatment of things going on.

Going to take a break on it until Sat/Sunday, try to do some lip/hand studies before coming back to this so I can get it right.

(also where the heck are all the people that were jazzed about this contest before)

Edit: why did I draw something with so much damn stuff in it

Edit 2: also is it weird that by pure coincidence 2 of the last 3 contest entries I did involved women wearing eye patches

The pose is horrible. Your pinup girl should be riding that treasure chest like it's got a penis, not like she's looking for the seat belt.

She looks so....static.

I think the big problem is that pinups are all about curves that lead the eye around the body, sort of giving us a tour of all the good bits. Right now your girl is just sort of sitting, musket placed strategically over crotch (?) shoulders hunched, right arm limply dangling. Her arms and legs intersect at harsh angles making her look jagged and uncomfortable, and while she has quite a set, she's not really doing much in her power to show it off. Her pose doesn't say so much "do me" as "do me?"

I have words I could use to describe what you might do to the pose, but instead pictures.



Obviously not an ideal or very creative pose, but I think it kind of gets some semblance of a point across about curves and leading the eye to "show off the goods"

Of course it'll be a cold day in hell before I can give you any useful advice but I've had a few and was feeling frisky

Tam

no reason her arm couldn't be bent and still on the treasure chest

Kendeathwalker

I drew a pin up girl.

There happens to be a contest for pin up girls going on.

Charis

?

mensch-o-matic

ooh baby

ManonvonSuperock

that is a hell of a schnoz.

melting_doll

God damnit, Bacon! Stop killing all our dreams and start sucking so the rest of us can feel like we have a chance.

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No but really, that's so effing rad.

GurtPerk

WIP on something I might use for this contest, simple reference put together. I liked the military babe pin up so going for that. Still need to establish a light source, shadows. Really looking for composition noters/critical flaws.



I added a view of the grid I used for the bg. Still not crazy about the wood planks. Really open to a lot of suggestions on this one.

Thane

that looks eerily like Tina Fey

NotASenator

I think it is eerily Tina Fey.

rts

An oddly squished and distorted Tina Fey.

Charis

Making some kind of awkward swimming motions over a machine gun.

Loomdun

shes going HOW DO I GRAB GUN AM I PRETTY YET?

mensch-o-matic

yeah you'll really want to change her arms/face completely, gurt, and something's wrong with the gun's position(?) though i cant tell just what.

no_toast

My girlfriend wanted to participate for this although she's not a forumer here. Again, not an official entry but she just wanted to share this with you guys. So, something inspired by this topic.

exit

she should register! : D

earthwormadam

Yes that is effin cool.

mully

make her register, that is stylish as hell

Thane

That hair looks like late 90s bubblegum

that is a good drawing

ManonvonSuperock

are you worried that we're going to internet steal her, no toast?

NotASenator

That is really awesome, no_toast's girlfriend.

mad-teaparty

Hi, thanks guys! (uh, it's me... no_toast's girlfriend)..... whooo yeaaah.... duh....). I registered here. The pressure was big. TOO BIG.

rts

Welcome to the forum.

Prospicience

For some reason I imagine you laughing a very subtle, but maniacal laugh after saying that cake.

Welcome lady teaparty.

rts

I don't laugh.

Tam

Or smile.

Cake is a robot. And not a cool one like Rutger Hauer.

Metalbourne

Tam wrote: »

Or smile.

Cake is a robot. And not a cool one like Rutger Hauer.

NightDragon

:lol:

Surfpossum

So I've just been lurking for the past few months but then I saw this challenge thread again and I came as fast as I could.

I guess this isn't really a classic pinup about patriotism or firemen, but have at it.

I'm gonna link it, though, in case it is NSFW.

Yeah there's no background and yeah I rushed the hands and yeah I'm not entirely sure on the black outline.
Also I may try my hand at something involving more firemen if I can not be incredibly lazy.

Tonkka

I think Mully wanted to draw me for this contest during PAX but I was an elusive subject.

Tee-hee.

In short, I had an idea but man I have not been able to execute.

DeeLock

Surfpossum wrote: »

So I've just been lurking for the past few months but then I saw this challenge thread again and I came as fast as I could.

I guess this isn't really a classic pinup about patriotism or firemen, but have at it.

I'm gonna link it, though, in case it is NSFW.

Yeah there's no background and yeah I rushed the hands and yeah I'm not entirely sure on the black outline.
Also I may try my hand at something involving more firemen if I can not be incredibly lazy.

Lots of .jpeg artifacts, I'd save again at a higher quality.

Surfpossum

DeeLock wrote: »

Lots of .jpeg artifacts, I'd save again at a higher quality.

Yeesh. I need to start checking stuff before throwing it online. I also took a moment to clean up the face and some of the lines.

I also just saw McGibs' sketch for his demon pinup and now I feel extremely unoriginal. At least mine is red.

Kendeathwalker

surf- Really liking the rythms in that drawing...however the colors make my eyes bleed

Sonic

colors are forthcoming (I hope):


Edit:
may do some more work on it, but for now:

earthwormadam

i can dig it

Thane

her underpants were stolen somewhere between sketch and color

misosoup

Surfpossum wrote: »

...I saw this challenge thread again and I came as fast as I could

:winky:

sorry for lowering the tone

Sonic

Now with 100% more underwear (and other minor updates):

Spoiler:

RubberAC

I LIKED IT BETTER BEFORE

Sonic

Its amazing what a difference that little tiny strip on her hip can make. What do you guys think, undies or no undies?

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herherh what a stupid question...