I kind of just drew it for me to get it out of my system. A girl visited me this weekend and she flew out yesterday...and this is how I felt.
Also since I haven't drawn anything on tablet in forever it was a good exercise.
...OMG dude...maybe it has to happen to you..cause i've been there, and i knew EXACTLY the second i saw it what was going on, and i thought, "i know that feeling"
For this comic, not much you can do to avoid the copy/paste effect, you could have redrawn it three times, but I don't think it would have necessarily made much of a difference. Nice clean linework!! I think different thicknesses in the lines would benefit this strip greatly. You've got essentially 3 layers of outside/background, window/middleground, and character/foreground, yet the line weight doesn't seem to follow any form or function of thickness.
Perhaps instead of having the same posture in all three panels to break the copy/pasteyness, you could have accentuated the sigh with a suitable pose. Someone who sighs would be a bit more slouchy methinks.
I really enjoyed some of the later pieces in your comic, and can wait to see more. Do you have anymore life drawings for me to look at and enjoy with glee?
Thank you! I don't do life drawings any more like the ones I have at the start of the thread, sorry.
Sometimes I wish I could spend the time to do more, but the last ones I did were assignments like, 3 years ago, and I don't have the patience for that shit haha.
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Ha, I believe the correct term is "laziness."
I'll post some photos from that and more later, I've just been super busy.
Also since I haven't drawn anything on tablet in forever it was a good exercise.
Perhaps instead of having the same posture in all three panels to break the copy/pasteyness, you could have accentuated the sigh with a suitable pose. Someone who sighs would be a bit more slouchy methinks.
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And yeah I guess a slouch or perhaps head looking down would have made for better body language in that last panel.
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I love this!
Sometimes I wish I could spend the time to do more, but the last ones I did were assignments like, 3 years ago, and I don't have the patience for that shit haha.
But I like my metal slug avatar here too much to change it