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Doing Bad Things to Good People

I've hit a point in the story I'm currently writing, and it looks like I might be killing off a character that I've become rather attached to. As much as it pains me to do it, I really think it might need to be done. I know it might sound a little weird to some people, (not only are they imaginary people, but they're my imaginary people.) I'm fairly certain that I'm not the only person who has a hard time hurting their creations, so does anyone have any advice on getting over this apprehension? I'd also love to hear some examples where the rest of you have had similar issues or even examples of times you didn't hesitate in the slightest!

(Also I'm new to the forums, and really hope that this is the right place to post this sort of thing. If it's not, I'd appreciate being pointed in the right direction so it doesn't happen again, thanks!)

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  • Carole_VaudryCarole_Vaudry Registered User regular
    Hi Zyconis!

    First, why do you feel you have to kill this character? Is it because his part in the story is done and can't bring anything more to it? Is it because his death is the necessary catalyst for the hero to answer the call to adventure? Is it useful to get the reader more involved with the setting and story? All this might help you get to term with his eventual death... or to give him a new lease on life.

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  • TheRealZyconisTheRealZyconis Registered User
    I feel like the character has done what he needed to do for the sake of the story, and I don't think his continued existence is really going to accomplish anything. I'm sure I could keep him around and it wouldn't hurt the story, but then I feel like I'm just wimping out on doing what should be done. *headdesk*

  • ElJeffeElJeffe Super Moderator, Moderator, ClubPA mod
    I see fiction as principally about creating emotions. Characters are a means to that end. You should do to a character, then, whatever achieves the kind of emotion you're going for, whether it's an emotion the reader should feel, or an emotion another character should feel.

    Personally, I sort of like killing off my characters. But then I'm kind of a dick.

    Riley: "You're a marsupial!"
    Maddie: "I am not!"
    Riley: "You're a marsupial!"
    Maddie: "I am a placental mammal!"
  • MagellMagell Registered User regular
    Killing characters is one of the most satisfying parts of creating them. Just remember you can always create a new character for something. I'm not a fan of people, so that probably makes it easier for me to off my characters.

    I like using the death of a character as a motivation for another. Not necessarily something as obvious as revenge, but just a wakeup call.

  • TheRealZyconisTheRealZyconis Registered User
    I guess maybe I am one of the few people who has trouble doing this then! I think it's because I've spent a lot of time crafting these (hopefully) believable characters to the extent of writing things that might not get mentioned at any point in the final product, just to really flesh out their personalities. Maybe someday I'll learn to enjoy it, maybe not.

    I briefly considered killing off a different character, one I don't particularly like, instead of the one that probably needs to die, but then I realized that there's no way it could possibly make the same impact on the reader.

  • LilnoobsLilnoobs Alpha Queue Registered User regular
    Kill the one you like.

    Always kill the one you (the author) like. Kill your babies.
    It will force you to create better characters. Kill them and only have characters you despise be your lead.

  • AAvertigoAAvertigo Registered User regular
    I guess maybe I am one of the few people who has trouble doing this then! I think it's because I've spent a lot of time crafting these (hopefully) believable characters to the extent of writing things that might not get mentioned at any point in the final product, just to really flesh out their personalities. Maybe someday I'll learn to enjoy it, maybe not.

    Think of the character's death as the ultimate expression of their believability; as real life is fragile and easily extinguished. Though this should not be taken to mean that killing characters lend them to be more believable.


    Also:
    I feel like the character has done what he needed to do for the sake of the story, and I don't think his continued existence is really going to accomplish anything. I'm sure I could keep him around and it wouldn't hurt the story, but then I feel like I'm just wimping out on doing what should be done. *headdesk*

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    but then I realized that there's no way it could possibly make the same impact on the reader.

    What I gather from this is that the character was made to die in this story, and that the story will not achieve its maximum potential without the death of said character. Therefore denying the character's death is doing an injustice to both character and story.

    TLDR: KILL! KILL! KILL!

    -A

  • TheRealZyconisTheRealZyconis Registered User
    So it seems the general consensus is to just get over it and kill the character. I really appreciate the encouragement towards literary-murder, it's what I was hoping to get from you all, (seeing as I knew it in my heart that he had to die, I just couldn't do it without some good old-fashioned mob-mentality.)

  • AAvertigoAAvertigo Registered User regular
    I'll be honest, when I had to murder a character in one of my novels (that was a lifetime friend of my main character) I almost felt like crying a little.

    hahah

    You are not alone!
    -A

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