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Rate my trailer!

ANTVGM64ANTVGM64 Registered User regular
edited December 2009 in Help / Advice Forum
So I'm entering myself into a competition at my school for best trailer or promo, and I wanted to submit one of the two following videos:


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vvICsV6bHZg

or

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MIyzHRBART8


The second one is more professional, but I think the first is more fun.


Things I know. First, the "Family" trailer has a coupla technical hiccups I gotta fix. Second, I know it contains a good deal of debuachary. I know the camera work on the 2nd is a little shaky in some places, but I think the concept of the show wins versus a silly trailer about pot smoking friends.


So any critique is welcome!

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  • SentrySentry Registered User regular
    edited December 2009
    I say submit the second one.

    The first looks like the worst episode of Scrubs ever.

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  • KyouguKyougu Registered User regular
    edited December 2009
    Shouldn't it be experience, not expierence?

    And I say go with the second one too, cause I had no idea what the first one was suppose to be about.

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  • WileyWiley In the dirt.Registered User regular
    edited December 2009
    Second one.

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  • ForkesForkes Registered User regular
    edited December 2009
    I would agree with everyone here in saying the second one.

    And if you have time, re-edit it, the audio need a lot or work. Either pump up the voices or lower the music, at times it was difficult to hear what the guy was saying.

    But, seriously...the second one.

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  • AlyceInWonderlandAlyceInWonderland Registered User regular
    edited December 2009
    Second one, hands down.

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