Looking good so far. I'd make a few more nicer curves around HIS right side stomach. At the moment its a little too straight. if you fit it more to his rib cage and muscles (base it more on human anatomy) it may look better.
Keep going. Lovew the concept and the palette.
Looking good so far. I'd make a few more nicer curves around HIS right side stomach. At the moment its a little too straight. if you fit it more to his rib cage and muscles (base it more on human anatomy) it may look better.
Keep going. Lovew the concept and the palette.
BTW nice website portfolio
Thank you, I appreciate the crits. And yeah, my website really need an update @[email protected]
Sorry if someone already figured this out, but I agree that it is off in the perspective department. I think what everyone is seeing but not quite picking up on is that the scene is all in (near) perfect perspective, but the figures in the scene are in a totally aren't.
Now I could be doing this wrong, but if you look at all the lines of the background scenery, they all line up, but if you draw lines through, for example, the guards shoulders, he appears to have a significantly different horizontal like than the doorway he is supposedly walking straight through. The guy on the right, in order to be balanced the way he is, crouched on his heels, his hips are also probably in roughly horizontal alignment, but that line is also way off. Similarly, even if you take into account that the guy on the left is leaning in toward the doorway (and the POV) and adjust for that, the line between his hips is way out of the horizontal as well.
So again, I could be horribly wrong about this, but it looks to me like your figures are not aligned with your scenery at all.
Sorry if someone already figured this out, but I agree that it is off in the perspective department. I think what everyone is seeing but not quite picking up on is that the scene is all in (near) perfect perspective, but the figures in the scene are in a totally aren't.
Now I could be doing this wrong, but if you look at all the lines of the background scenery, they all line up, but if you draw lines through, for example, the guards shoulders, he appears to have a significantly different horizontal like than the doorway he is supposedly walking straight through. The guy on the right, in order to be balanced the way he is, crouched on his heels, his hips are also probably in roughly horizontal alignment, but that line is also way off. Similarly, even if you take into account that the guy on the left is leaning in toward the doorway (and the POV) and adjust for that, the line between his hips is way out of the horizontal as well.
So again, I could be horribly wrong about this, but it looks to me like your figures are not aligned with your scenery at all.
Ya know... there comes a point where you kind of just have to let things go. This image works fine, it looks great. Maybe the perspective isn't 100% as completely perfect as it could be but it really doesn't ruin the image.
Plus, if the aim or requirements was that it needed to be 100% accurate, the artist may as well just trace a photo.
Still, nothing wrong with pointing out the flaws, even if they are little nitpicks. I still think the security gaurds torch looks a little weird being coming outside of the door frame, but it still works.
Myk: good to see more work. Resurrect your thread dude
You've totally over-worked those lines around his mouth. It looks like the mouth section is completely detached from the rest of his face. It'd look cool on an alien concept, but it just looks freaky-deaky here.
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In front (of what would be) her left shoulder. Something like that. I was gonna come in with some 8b (its all 4B and HB) and darken some areas. I'm not gonna do that now. Haha.
You've totally over-worked those lines around his mouth. It looks like the mouth section is completely detached from the rest of his face. It'd look cool on an alien concept, but it just looks freaky-deaky here.
hehehe, Yeah your probably right, Im used to the way I do graphic novel stuff, overexxagerating(sp?) and stuff. Ill fix'er up!
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Looking good so far. I'd make a few more nicer curves around HIS right side stomach. At the moment its a little too straight. if you fit it more to his rib cage and muscles (base it more on human anatomy) it may look better.
Keep going. Lovew the concept and the palette.
BTW nice website portfolio
Doodling in MSPaint as a break from commission thingies and homework.
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kendeath, I fucking love that
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Now I could be doing this wrong, but if you look at all the lines of the background scenery, they all line up, but if you draw lines through, for example, the guards shoulders, he appears to have a significantly different horizontal like than the doorway he is supposedly walking straight through. The guy on the right, in order to be balanced the way he is, crouched on his heels, his hips are also probably in roughly horizontal alignment, but that line is also way off. Similarly, even if you take into account that the guy on the left is leaning in toward the doorway (and the POV) and adjust for that, the line between his hips is way out of the horizontal as well.
So again, I could be horribly wrong about this, but it looks to me like your figures are not aligned with your scenery at all.
edit: you drew a line through two different points on the guard's shoulder and both thieves are leaning toward the guard
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Ya know... there comes a point where you kind of just have to let things go. This image works fine, it looks great. Maybe the perspective isn't 100% as completely perfect as it could be but it really doesn't ruin the image.
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Still, nothing wrong with pointing out the flaws, even if they are little nitpicks. I still think the security gaurds torch looks a little weird being coming outside of the door frame, but it still works.
Myk: good to see more work. Resurrect your thread dude
Got some vacation time in and did this over the course of a couple of hours, working on compositing.
Unfinished because my utter lack of planning became very apparent.
You've totally over-worked those lines around his mouth. It looks like the mouth section is completely detached from the rest of his face. It'd look cool on an alien concept, but it just looks freaky-deaky here.
man i just love the shading on this
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Good point, hm...
She's dead, but that's true.
EDIT: I've moved his right arm to be underneath hers, his left so it's not so creepy and I'm messing around with his legs.
hehehe, Yeah your probably right, Im used to the way I do graphic novel stuff, overexxagerating(sp?) and stuff. Ill fix'er up!
Oh! And new project stuff!
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Cleaned and (I hope) fixed. Now to get to work on the details.
Her pelvis should be sitting on the ground and her legs should be all over the place.
were you going for something generally like this?