My name's Zach, and I do a comic called SMBC. I used to post here years ago when I was working on my art more. Well, lately I've been feeling a little stagnant, and I thought I'd ask for some expert notes.
Specifically, for this image:
The bottom panel in specific feels really hard on the eyes. The image is supposed to be track and field guys hurdling cadavers. Either because of composition or coloring, I feel like the eye isn't properly lead through the image. So, if you guys could offer some tips, it'd be most welcome.