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Cool, which one do you mean, one of the first two or the title at the end?
The title at the end
It does not look good on black and it does not look great zooming out from it, and it just looks sort of cheap
Maybe it's cliched now but just some faded out typewritten font would be good for a logo? Or maybe something that looks like it was scribbled out in a rush? I don't know, something simple and minimalist always works for me
Also the teaser established a sort of creepy, spooky mood, and this theatrical trailer is just structured like every other low budget horror flick trailer ever made
Also the sound was off a bit? But I guess that's a problem with not having a lot of mics or whatever
Where are the movies where some fool is just doing some urban exploration or parkouring around or accidentally gets off at the wrong bus stop and runs into UNSPEAKABLE HORROR!
Actually a guy getting off at the wrong bus stop, like one stop earlier than his normal stop, and finding himself in a odd, otherworldly place, knowing that's he been passing this place on his way to work day after day, watching other people get off at this stop
Ah fuck now my idea is already stolen
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so there is a 'mermaid' in the lake near the cabin and its controls people.
first is the long haired dude and then it moves one as it kills more people and possesses the blond hair chick and she kills some peeps
Regarding the logos, I'd get rid of the framed picture look entirely and just keep the black background with the white tree part. That actually looks good. Hobo one is alright, but you should make the white background stay widescreen the entire time. It looks awkward when the black borders come in.
Ultimately I agree with what everyone else has said. Teaser was better, most of this footage looks pretty generic with the best stuff happening towards the end, and I couldn't tell what the film was really about.
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On the other hand, I haven't made anything more than some 10 minute shorts, so I applaud you for completing this.
Also I entirely sure what was going on in the trailer, but I got the gist of it.
Everyone has that damn monster voice. Don't use that monster voice.
But, otherwise, I would watch this movie.
The title at the end
It does not look good on black and it does not look great zooming out from it, and it just looks sort of cheap
Maybe it's cliched now but just some faded out typewritten font would be good for a logo? Or maybe something that looks like it was scribbled out in a rush? I don't know, something simple and minimalist always works for me
Also the teaser established a sort of creepy, spooky mood, and this theatrical trailer is just structured like every other low budget horror flick trailer ever made
Also the sound was off a bit? But I guess that's a problem with not having a lot of mics or whatever
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Just get someone to hand write the title with a brush. That always looks foreboding.
Really?
Actually a guy getting off at the wrong bus stop, like one stop earlier than his normal stop, and finding himself in a odd, otherworldly place, knowing that's he been passing this place on his way to work day after day, watching other people get off at this stop
Ah fuck now my idea is already stolen
first is the long haired dude and then it moves one as it kills more people and possesses the blond hair chick and she kills some peeps
logo needs to be better.
the teaser trailer was way creepier
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watching the teaser trailer again?
fucking 1000000000000 times better
if i saw that teaser trailer on the TV i would probably go see it.
this newest one? no way
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Ultimately I agree with what everyone else has said. Teaser was better, most of this footage looks pretty generic with the best stuff happening towards the end, and I couldn't tell what the film was really about.