Lost Salientblink twiceif you'd like me to mercy kill youRegistered Userregular
edited August 2010
Okay, so
I've got a (very) short piece I've been working on and it's not really as polished as I'd like but I think I'm at the point where I need a second pair of editing eyes
Anybody want to read a thing?
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"Sandra has a good solid anti-murderer vibe. My skin felt very secure and sufficiently attached to my body when I met her. Also my organs." HAIL SATAN
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I've got a (very) short piece I've been working on and it's not really as polished as I'd like but I think I'm at the point where I need a second pair of editing eyes
Anybody want to read a thing?
"Sandra has a good solid anti-murderer vibe. My skin felt very secure and sufficiently attached to my body when I met her. Also my organs." HAIL SATAN
What's yer emails?
"Sandra has a good solid anti-murderer vibe. My skin felt very secure and sufficiently attached to my body when I met her. Also my organs." HAIL SATAN
yeah. i opt to not use that one for jobs
Woooooo.
"Sandra has a good solid anti-murderer vibe. My skin felt very secure and sufficiently attached to my body when I met her. Also my organs." HAIL SATAN
I should probably edit that thing I did at some point huh
totally slipped my mind
I wrote a very short thing
http://ficly.com/stories/20125
kusu i think you could fix the meter and make it perfect if you want but haha the last line
it's terrible
'what if batman was a vampire'
basically batman kills and eats bad guys for sustenance
it ends with a rooftop fight scene between lieutenant gordon van helsing and batman, where van helsing shoves him off the roof, as a daylight breaks
they never recover the body
fade to black
"THE END"
then slowly
a questionmark appears
It's about a vampire that only feeds on people who over-indulge on Snack Foods.