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New Webcomic - Advice and crits?
XXboxGirl
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hey guys so my name is Katie. ive been workng on this webcomic but its just a work in progress because im always so busy. i wish i had more time (dont we all). Anyway, it's called XXbox. the two x's are for two x chromosomes because the comic focuses on girl gamers.
I thought a comic that was like a female version of penny arcade would be successful so tell me what you think!
Thanks!
I thought a comic that was like a female version of penny arcade would be successful so tell me what you think!
Thanks!
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I'm going to suggest that you don't know anything about the Artists Corner.
It is great if you joined to have discussions and post and stuff like that!
But. If you really want to improve your webcomic, and it definitely needs improvement, post it in the artists corner and be ready to take some criticism.
edit: Some really, really harsh criticism
I propose my bottom
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disapprove
welp, that's it XXboxGirl
pack it up
Honestly, there's not even a lot to say about these beyond, "Learn to draw." A new thread over there wouldn't be any more useful. What the person should do instead is look at this thread, practice a lot, and post in the AC sketch thread for some general feedback. Then, in a year, make a thread.
Though I think you're right to wonder whether this is even a real account or just baiting.
for all those people who say they disapprove, can you tell me why? or give me some tips or something
Do you really not know why?
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really i think its about the joke and how funny it is so im not too concerned about my art as long as it gets the joke across
That loincloth is just begging to be torn off.
Need some stuff designed or printed? I can help with that.
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In all be better then you could ever be, so give up now.
hate to be the bearer of bad news, but you draw badly
it's the same crappy anime style we've seen in webcomics hundreds of times before
that you don't care that your art is bad is troublesome, as you're showing that you don't care to improve. Art is one of THE most necessary things for a webcomic. It's the thing people will notice first and stay with them the most
the joke that you also put so much importance into? it's also awful
you're using MS Paint right?
It really doesn't have the chops to make a decent webcomic unless you're going for a "look" or you're really really talented using it. Heck, even MSPaint Adventures is made in photoshop.
I would suggest downloading GIMP (it's like a free version of photoshop) and learning how to use layers to colour instead of the paint bucket tool.
Also try to not use a font to render your text? Maybe handwrite the text. Use bubbles and work on their flow. At the very least, don't use comic sans.
Need some stuff designed or printed? I can help with that.
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Dunno how that's hard to understand
I get jokes!
And there is was, a giant spider in act three.
The drawing isn't even really at the stage where she should be looking at software tools.
yeah but see how I'm offering advice?
Need some stuff designed or printed? I can help with that.
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