A set of comedic writings

Zackkaufen

I am attempting at least to generate some interest in a 'comedy blog' I am writing: it is a series of articles which I hope are funny. If you don't think they are funny, that's fine, you are probably right, it is merely me starting out. Feel free to post negative feedback, hopefully constructive?

(FYI the blogs are not in any way accurate, all information is completely fictional)

http://zackkaufen.blogspot.com/

m3nace

Sorry but this is'nt a place to merely post links to your work. Smart as it seems it's against the forum rules .
If you want to receive critique then I suggest you post your comedic writings here in this thread instead of sitewhoring.
Welcome to this place though.

tynic

And actually, the Writers Block is probably a better place for crits on this kind of stuff.

The Lovely Bastard

You should bring this to the Writers Block

But in case you don't, here is a brief critique

To be brutally honest, your blog isn't funny.

At all.

The entries meander too much to even build to a proper punchline, and the ideas behind them don't hold any comedic value.

It reads like you watched a Seinfeld bit and stopped it after "What's the deal with x?" and forgot that the joke comes after that part.

iglidante

I started reading the first one, The World of Robots. I tried to get into it. Honestly, it didn't grab me at all. The bit about forgotten text messages was...not funny. I wasn't sure what the joke was. Or even if there was one. I lost my interest pretty quickly after that.

What are you aiming to do with this? Who's your audience?

beavotron

Go to the writer's block for stuff like this, please.
http://forums.penny-arcade.com/forumdisplay.php?f=27