Junk Food Fighter comic

Soda Vicious

Hey all. Just thought I'd share my new comic project... Junk Food Fighter. The continuing story can be found via the link in my sig. I hope you enjoy.

Thanks,
Kieran

Iruka

You're hands are alittle mushy here and there, there are alot of details within them but the overall structure is off in a few panels. Your trucker also has the same expression through the whole comic, I dont know if thats intentional. Other wise, visually this is pretty cool. I'm kinda thrown by the stereotype asian though.

flowerhoney

From where you've placed Petey on the second page in front of that text, it looks like a hideous tentacle is coming out of his mouth, so I originally thought he was an alien and this was a story about aliens

Soda Vicious

Iruka - Well, you cannot win every battle. I will keep that in mind when I do more hands. Doing 3 full pages a week... well, I have to keep things moving or I will never get anything done. The face is intentional. Watch a bunch of bad 80's action flicks. It's part of his character. Thanks for checking it out and for the comments. Sorry about the stereotype, but there will be more of that to come.

flowerhoney - Hey! Nice catch there. I never thought about it, but you're right! Oh, and there are aliens in the story... well, one anyways.

- Kieran

flowerhoney

For a second I thought you were going to tell me it was intentional =3

winter_combat_knight

I like the style. Im not too sure about the thick line around the characters.
When reading, i imagined the asian guy sounding like the dude from south park who owns the 'City Wok'.

*checked out your website. that's a fancy banner. *thumbs up*

Soda Vicious

flowerhoney - Nope.

winter - Thanks for the nice comments. I tend to use a heavier line with black and white art. I looked up the City Wok reference and you are not far from being right.

EgbertF

Though i don't like the story, but the style is good, hope to look more of you works!