earthwormadam wrote: »
Also the handwriting does not irk me as much as the word bubbles. There seems to be no reason for them to look like that other than to be edgy. It's cramping the lettering. I'm pretty sure if you just removed them and put them in the regular old circular word bubbles it would look 10 times better. Well maybe not 10, but a lot. Don't get me wrong it's good to deviate from the norm, but some methods are tried and true.
RubberAC wrote: »
your writing is pretty funny
im not really diggin your art though
it just seems kind of generic "internet cute" simple emo cartoons like those old "i had cookie but eated it" comics that float around still