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seattle nerdcore pod cast and my rapz

cheatermovescheatermoves Registered User new member
edited January 2011 in Artist's Corner
hey guys I live in the greater Seattle area and I really enjoy going to the many nerdcore shows up here. There is a big nerdcore scene here in the area. I decided to do my own pod cast informing you of all the shows. Also, I throwed down some very boobish raps for yall to listen to. If any of you feel like maybe giving me some feedback or something I'm kind of new at nerdcore rapping and trying to improve.

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  • KazakaKazaka Asleep Counting SheepRegistered User regular
    edited December 2010
    I feel like you need to work on your delivery and presence a bit. I don't know a whole lot about the "nerdcore" deal, but as far as I know a good MC has the confidence and charisma to work the crowd during a performance. This might be youtube jitters or whatever, so just chill out and rap firmly and boldly.

    As for your writing, there's good and bad. When you challenge yourself with syllables and you're rapping your fastest I like the feel more. Whenever you switch up to a refrain or try to sing a bit, you suffer some.

    This advice was given based on a listen to the fallout song. Keep working on it and good luck.

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  • earthwormadamearthwormadam ancient crust Registered User regular
    edited December 2010
    That was bad, and you are a bad person for pirating Fallout.

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  • KazakaKazaka Asleep Counting SheepRegistered User regular
    edited January 2011
    earthwormadam wrote: »
    That was bad, and you are a bad person for pirating Fallout.

    Okay I will admit that pirating Fallout is pretty not cool

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  • earthwormadamearthwormadam ancient crust Registered User regular
    edited January 2011
    Thank you.

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  • DMACDMAC Come at me, bro! Moderator Mod Emeritus
    edited January 2011
    My first locked thread of 2011. So exciting!

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