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Help me write an awesome Penny Arcade review.

1FOE1FOE Registered User new member
edited January 2011 in Help / Advice Forum
Hello, good people!

Hoping this doesn't sound fishy (with the subsequent link dropping an' all),
I want to introduce myself as the comic book reviewer behind the website 1foe.com

"graphic novel, TPB and webcomic reviews for the casual reader."


My goal in these reviews is enticing the casual reader to indulge in different comics / webcomics.
So, without further due, I want to invite to scrutinize the following review I've written of PA:

http://1foe.com/penny-arcade/

Do you think it's a decent review? Would you add/ remove anything?

Let me know your thoughts,
P.

1FOE on

Posts

  • bsjezzbsjezz Registered User regular
    edited January 2011
    the best thing might be to post the text of the review (rather than a link), and do it in the writer's block

    bsjezz on
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  • ceresceres When the last moon is cast over the last star of morning And the future has past without even a last desperate warningRegistered User, Moderator Mod Emeritus
    edited January 2011
    You are correct that this is probably not the world's best first post to a forum with "no sitewhoring" in the rules. I recommend taking bsjezz's advice and posting the text of your review in the subforum he linked. Make sure you read the rules in the announcements at the top of the forum before posting.

    ceres on
    And it seems like all is dying, and would leave the world to mourn
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