Stinky fingers art. NSFW

stinkyfingers

Hi, I posted here before but I cant seem to post in my other thread....In the time ive been inactive ive been aslo exploring 3d and hopfully going to launch a webcomic or two. thanks for looking.

Comments and critiques are always welocome.

Iruka

I remember that iron man image, Which works are the most recent? The last image is really impressive.

stinkyfingers

from the ninja down to the 3d works are recent in order from oldest to latest.

but fiorm there (oldest to latest is the iron man, the lady profile, naked horn lady, paladin and sorcerous and the panned out veiw of the swordgirl.

thanks for looking, I have a 2d and a 3d peice in the works that I juggle.

stinkyfingers

Hey yall its been a while. Ive joined the USAF sense then. 3d is still frustrainting to me, there is so much to learn...

anywho first digi draing in like 8 months, just to loosen up, moving to 3d again.



as always any crits and comment are apreciated. my end goal is to end as a VG modeler so dont hold back!

stinkyfingers wrote: »

Sben a while. been real busy.




karin zanzuki from SFA3 I thinks her name. getting better at 3d. hopefully i can post a game ready asset sooner or later.







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spitoons

These are so good! I really like the Hitmonlee one, keep up the great work!

ninjai

The draw or die image made my evening :P

NakedZergling

Joe Mad much?

stinkyfingers

ninjai wrote:

The draw or die image made my evening :P

Ha, sometimes you just have to sacrafice to get where you want to be.

spitoons wrote:

These are so good! I really like the Hitmonlee one, keep up the great work!

thanks man, that was my first 3d attempt, the geometry is realy poor so I couldent be used in any form of media.

NakedZergling wrote:

Joe Mad much?

I do take inspirations from Mr. mad. also frazata, anime and video games. From what Ive heard, I should tear away from My manga influence or at least vary it.

NakedZergling

I wouldn't call mad Manga. He does a fine blend of traditional comic and manga. His new "Avenging Spider Man" comic is great.

stinkyfingers

Sben a while. been real busy.




karin zanzuki from SFA3 I thinks her name. getting better at 3d. hopefully i can post a game ready asset sooner or later.






WHIPS

stinkyfingers

Sben a while. been real busy.




karin zanzuki from SFA3 I thinks her name. getting better at 3d. hopefully i can post a game ready asset sooner or later.







WHIPS

wahay

There's a lot to love here, but I'm really excited about that environment!

stinkyfingers

marin455 wrote: »

Wow, it is amazing stuff here. I love this blondie girl drawing - she had something in her eyes that make it great.

which one, the earlyer one or the revision?

wahay wrote: »

There's a lot to love here, but I'm really excited about that environment!

thanks man, I gotta jump back on that one.

stinkyfingers

sup update lolz image dump, Joined the military, trying to get good enough to get into the games industry as a 3d artist. C&C always welcome!

McJohnstable

Keep going, there's some great stuff here and you've heaps of potential. You're starting to break the mold quite nicely.

stinkyfingers

thank you, ive learned the basics by now, just need to get some portfolio stuff done, then its on to some mod/indie development.

Iruka

Your stuff has a really heavy feel, like WoW and Warhammer. Looks like your anatomy is slowly improving as well.

The girls face (in the 3d model) seems a little rough, but overall I like it. I think there may be some lumpiness in areas that's a bit unnecessary, you could maybe smooth out some muscles and simply some forms for more cartoony definition. Don't forget to have visual breaks in your armor design too. If everything is super busy with details and textures, the whole design will look cluttered.

stinkyfingers

yeah, that model was my first model ever, its purpose was for me to learn the general workflow of the programs, theory and application of game art. The general concensus on it was that it her face was messed up, kinda knew when I release it for critique, but what ever I spent 6 months on that damn thing, it served its purpose. I think the shaps that I think you mentioned where on puorpose. the model is low poly to be optimized for a real time game, to smooth out the polys I would have to add more geometry. it was a good exersise.


Thanks for the crits!


anywho I decided to do a nice render before I sculpt out the paladin.

stinkyfingers

someore stuff for the enviroment.

stinkyfingers

sketch, will model later.

stinkyfingers

UPDATE!







All game models.

stinkyfingers

NightDragon

Lots of stuff! Your execution is generally pretty good in these, but I'd suggest you spend a little bit more work on the stages before polish.

It feels like you are sometimes losing yourself in the details, making the forms hard to read, or making the scale of things seem off, etc. The forms in your first character are extremely hard to read. Everything it hyper reflective, and the same color (even the background). The texturing on the swords is so intense that you lose a sense of what's going on...the wear that you've added on makes the swords look like stone rather than metal. The texture scale on the cloth is enormous - if the weaving was that large, the cloth would not drape that way.

In your environments, the sense of scale is a little borked...you have stairs in that one piece, and these giant bannisters that [if I hadn't seen the stairs] would look like they're meant to be a few feet high. With the stairs, though, it seems like the bannisters are 10-12 feet high. There's a bit of a conflict there. I can see a similar issue in the last environment - the stairs are large enough that I would imagine a 6-foot character would bump their head on the ceiling.

When you do wear in the diffuse/specular textures, consider how it's interacting with the read of the forms of your model. For your vehicle with the turrets, the burnished edges that you have are VERY bright and VERY clean. When paint chips on metal, it looks much rougher, and is not as evenly dispersed across an edge, as you've done. The brightness of the burnished edges, and the fact that you've placed them in a LOT of places, across all your tiny little details, is making the larger forms get a bit lost.

So yeah...overall, your work isn't bad! Just try to focus a bit more on how the forms are reading, how the scale is reading, and try to use reference when you're looking up wear on a specific material.