Personface Critique Hour

PersonfacePersonface HAILGAY SATANRegistered User regular
edited July 2011 in Artist's Corner
SummerJPG.jpg
Winter.jpg
MasksOfTheFaceless.jpg
TheKnightPortrait.jpg
IlluminatedSmaller.jpg
Judgeof7.jpg
HeartOfDarknessSmaller.jpg
Trolloc.jpg
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SummerArmour.jpg
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Critique desired, in the hope that improvement is but a post away!

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Posts

  • EncEnc A Fool with Compassion The Land of Flowers (and Dragons)Registered User regular
    edited July 2011
    Is #6 Tash from CS Lewis?

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  • tynictynic PICNIC BADASS Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited July 2011
    I like your colours, and you have some great flow to your linework.

    I feel like your underlying structures could use some attention. There's a lot of skewing and a lack of balance in many of the drawings, which would be helped by more careful work in the planning stages.

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  • PersonfacePersonface HAIL GAY SATANRegistered User regular
    edited July 2011
    @Tynic Yes, a number of them are seriously lopsided, or drifting off the page. I think that's probably because most of them are basically rampant, overgrown doodles, and I really need to do more solidly planned work.

    @Enc In retrospect, that could be Tash, but I wasn't trying to depict him. And having said that, I think doing some Narnia work would be an interesting project, so thank you.

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  • KendeathwalkerKendeathwalker Registered User regular
    edited July 2011
    You would benefit greatly from doing a few cast drawings.

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