I really like the joke. I also like that you don't give a shit how many panels it takes to sell your joke (genuinely). I am not as excited about the art. Mostly the row of panels 10-12, but overall it has a technically sound but lacking heart feel to it. It reminds me of some early comic book work. Which if it was a look you are going for...well personally it would turn me off from reading your comic regularly if this is supposed to be something you do regularly. For some reason I just get this old library book smell in my brain when I look at your art.
It reminds me of some early comic book work.
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Whenever I read "comic" in a topic, I expect the worse, and check the thread just for the flaming.
This, on the other hand, has been a beautiful and refreshing experience, I enjoy the sense of humor, I agree with the rest about the art, but I do think that the art fits the comics like a glove.
And, welcome to AC, I really hope to see more of your work.