And so it all began with an idea...

GurtPerk

This is probably too early to critique. I'll update this thread later with some more relevant material that is easier to critique and isn't just a crazy idea of mine.

Godfather

The comic is hard to read, the hands are either too huge or mangled looking (last panel especially), panels set too far apart, and general anatomy needs work.

Props for not using a generic manga style though.

McGibs

I only got the comic because I had one of those robots. Other then that, it sucks.


For those of you who dont know, its the most awesome piggy bank ever created. You put a coin in his hand and he eats it with much gusto (he chews it, licks his lips, stamps his feet, rolls his eyes, and goes, "mmmmm").



Your comic does no justice to the awesomeness that is robie robot.

GurtPerk

Aaah, that is him, alright. Great find. I was doing it purely off of memory.

Grim Outlook

pfft, i eat loose change all the time and noone ever made a comic about me.

j4r

Amazing what you can find on the interweb.

Grim Outlook

someone on the interwebs is stalking me!

i actually look a lot like that, except 100 percent sexier

oh yeah!