Hi there! I'm a cartoonist/animator about to self-publish my first graphic novel which I'll be showcasing here along with some other art for fun and feedback.
the ultra bold lines are not making it for me, but thats just my opinion.
Yes, with a quick verbal "boom." You take a man's peko, you deny him his dab, all that is left is to rise up and tear down the walls of Jericho with a ".....not!" -TexiKen
Those last three pics with the "ultra bold lines" are all magnified and tightly cropped. The lines aren't so bold when you see them on the page at proper scale.
I am going for a crude Golden Age look with the first book, but that might not be everyone's cup o tea.
I would stick to colors within the CMYK range. Some of your blues and reds are far too bright to ever print correctly.
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These really aren't working for me. Stylistically every thing is far too rigid. Do you have any sketches?
Also the off gamut colours are searingly bad. Take Nib's advise and start doing your colours in CMYK, RGB is giving you options that no man should take.
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I am going for a crude Golden Age look with the first book, but that might not be everyone's cup o tea.
Also the off gamut colours are searingly bad. Take Nib's advise and start doing your colours in CMYK, RGB is giving you options that no man should take.