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First Person Shooter Live Action

witnessthesicknesswitnessthesickness Registered User regular
edited July 2012 in Artist's Corner
Please let me know what you think, it be highly appreciated :D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yLZ3HHXJjqk&feature=plcp

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    GrifterGrifter BermudaModerator mod
    Best part of the film is the newfoundland.

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    NappuccinoNappuccino Surveyor of Things and Stuff Registered User regular
    edited July 2012
    What happened to the knife guy in the 3rd life?

    Other than that, pretty good- I feel like it could have used a little more abbreviation towards the end (quick cuts to the easy kills) but pretty well done overall.

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    Mes3Mes3 Lurking behind your toilet Registered User regular
    edited July 2012
    Why is there so much loading? What is this; Doom 3?!? Also, the bracelets are super distracting. Don't do that again.

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    witnessthesicknesswitnessthesickness Registered User regular
    We had to put loading screen scenes in as our back door got painted, and as such our continuity was broken. So we had to improvise.

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    NappuccinoNappuccino Surveyor of Things and Stuff Registered User regular
    I feel like you could use some quick cuts to get around that problem and reduce pacing issues as well.

    A la Breathless.

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    Rorus Raz wrote: »
    There's also the possibility you just can't really grow a bear like other guys.

    Not even BEAR vaginas can defeat me!
    cakemikz wrote: »
    And then I rub actual cake on myself.
    Loomdun wrote: »
    thats why you have chest helmets
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    Kralj187Kralj187 Registered User new member
    edited July 2012
    I may not be a pro at such things, but to me it looks really good.


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    MalReynoldsMalReynolds The Hunter S Thompson of incredibly mild medicines Registered User regular
    Nappuccino wrote: »
    What happened to the knife guy in the 3rd life?

    Other than that, pretty good- I feel like it could have used a little more abbreviation towards the end (quick cuts to the easy kills) but pretty well done overall.

    He gets wallhacked at the beginning when First Person shoots the window.

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