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GameLord showing off his work

JeremiahCraneJeremiahCrane Registered User new member
edited September 2012 in Artist's Corner
Hey everybody, been a lurker on PA for awhile but I finally decided to register and show off some of my stuff I've created.

I guess for starters I should say I'm attempting to produce some quality videogame-centered comedy skits and heres the first one I've produced.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DCV_RS72YXg

It's centered around the new Playstation All-Stars release and the characters that have been announced. I'd love some feedback and criticism!

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    FANTOMASFANTOMAS Flan ArgentavisRegistered User regular
    You guys need a writer more than air, water or food. I saw no real comedy here, it actually resambles the structure of a game oriented webcomic. The basic idea of the "skit" it doesnt really have much substance, takes far too long to build up, and the final panel is not only weak, but even annoying... holly shoot... really ?

    Yes, with a quick verbal "boom." You take a man's peko, you deny him his dab, all that is left is to rise up and tear down the walls of Jericho with a ".....not!" -TexiKen
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    JeremiahCraneJeremiahCrane Registered User new member
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KsAq7WEKF4s

    Well, although the last video wasn't well received, we've tried another shot and would love some feedback!

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