Hardcore critics accepted!

WalterMachado

Hi guys, here is the best place to hear hardcore critics.
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Mustang

Production wise it's pretty good, but the song is too repetitive for an instrumental.
The main melody is also overly simplistic, you need to get a bit of groove in there and start playing between the beats.

WalterMachado

Thanks Mustang, I forgot to say on the topic that this track are being produced to a soundtrack, thats why the little complexity on the notes. More variety be "too much information" on this situation, but I will follow your lead and try to add a little more layers...

Mustang

I wouldn't say more layers are necessary, but more variety. Maybe a section where you complicate the melody while maintaining the basic structure, and then bring it back again.

ShadowsofBirds

It would help to see what it's composed to.
But without that I'd say -
On my speakers the drums are a bit too prominent in the mix..
You might just try arpeggiating a passage of the accompaniment for that variance.. but again it's hard to say without seeing what you're seeing.