New to this part of the forum. Figured I might try and get a few critiques here and there.
I'm making a war comic. Though it's not the typical "yay war for good reasons" or your kiddy comic war, I want to put lots of violence, gore, sex and rather "Grey" areas, with lots of chaos into it.
So some quick concept work:http://evi.kuiki.net/Art/Comic/concept.jpghttp://evi.kuiki.net/Art/Comic/panel.jpg
I need to fix the empty space and fill it with something. I'm thinking perhaps shots of a sweaty finger on the trigger, shots of a cigarette burning to denote the stress and fatigue. Maybe a close up shot of tired eyes or something. My issue here is denoting movement of the background figures and filling the empty space with meaningful or relevant images.http://evi.kuiki.net/Art/Comic/panel2.jpg
Basically the same problem here, too much empty space. It's a good thing these are just concept panels.http://evi.kuiki.net/Art/Comic/ss1_1.jpg
And an uncompleted storyboardhttp://evi.kuiki.net/Art/Comic/stybrd_1.jpg
I eventually want the comic to look like this unfinished drawing, only you know...finished:
And then completely random stuff.
30min doodle after playing some AC4http://evi.kuiki.net/Art/Misc/doodle19.jpg
Something I gave up onhttp://evi.kuiki.net/Art/Misc/Gift/k_wip2.jpg
And to finish it all, my mascot showing how it's bad to drink and ride a bike: