I made some comics, and they're pretty squishy and tender right now, so harden them up with some of that sweet critique magic.
I'm going for a three panel punch cartoon style. I want to start my own website sometime in the future, but for now I'm gonna post 'em in some forums and hope for feedback. If this gets some positive reviews I might jump to image boards.
The main thing I'm looking for feedback on is clarification (is it clarified enough, do I know what's going on, are the jokes funny). After that the art (tips, tricks).
This comic is the first I've ever done on photo shop; it's also the first comic I've done digitally that I think came out decent.
So, This joke isn't really "gettable" without some explaining.
You see, I play a bunch of Sonic the Hedgehog 2
and in The Metropolis Zone
there were these praying mantis enemies that shout out their "arms" at you. They are a huge ring drop and they frustrate me every goddamn time. That's what this comic's about. When I have my first born child it will be there, taking my rings. Then I will die to one of those stupidass staru looking things and be left without a continue (so dumb).
This one was super fun. I just finished it before posting all these. It just might be my favorite
So, yeah thanks a lot if you choose to post on this thread. I'm new around here and I would like to be apart of you're community. I've posted one other thing before and it sucked some big, fat, juicy robuttnick
. So, hopefully this will be a better stepping off point for the future.