Webcomic "Big Cookie" Feedback
Hey guys! New to the forum. I recently started writing a webcomic called "Big Cookie". It's a comic about a candy planet that has real political issues.
Could I have some feedback on it?
Things I could use critique on:
- scanning technique
Thanks much erryone!
To help you with scanning, it would probably be best if you talked about the tools you have and the methods you are already using to give people an Idea of what you are working with. Do you have a tablet? Photoshop? How big are your drawings?
I work on 9 x 12 marker paper. I use measurements to make the frames, then draw and ink everything. Then it's scanned onto photoshop and I convert the files and whatnot, then color it.
I'm guessing most people do their frames in a digital editor?
You're leaving white spaces in tight areas. That detracts from the overall look of the piece. (One thing you can do to fix this is set your brush to "darken" and manually correct all the little spots the fill tool missed.)
Also, shading would really help the art look less flat. You can shade in Photoshop by making a new layer, setting it to 10%-15% opacity, and drawing over areas you want to shade in black, or any darker color.
HOLY CRAP LOL THAT'S AWESOME THANK YOU SO MUCH
Another area for improvement would be line thickness variation. That first page is really flattened out by the fact that everything is the same thickness, no matter how far away the setting is to the eye. The small building is the same thickness as the big building in the background. The further away something is, the more thin the lines should become. This will help things fade back and pop out. Try using some pens/markers that are different sizes. Keep at it.
Thank you so much. It means a lot to me.
Here's some updated color and line work:
@kainakano - I agree with Creagan that the white spaces are a problem, but I can also see the outlines of all your linework. Are you using the paint bucket tool on the same layer as your linework? That would cause this problem.
Creagan's suggestion would work, but a cleaner option would be to create a new layer on top of your linework layer....and set the new layer's blending mode to "Multiply". Now all of the color you put on that layer will automatically fill in the white space on your paper, and won't cover up the black linework. It's a much, much faster and cleaner way to work...and it allows for easy color-tweaking later, without having to worry about preserving your lines.
Wow, thanks so much. It seems like I taking an editing class would benefit me greatly; there are a lot of useful things I didn't know about Photoshop.
Here's the latest:
This character is a gummy reverend for the planet's religion.