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I'm looking for advice/critique! LGBT themes, diversity, and fantasy~
magp1e
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Hello, I am new to the forums!
I have been working on this webcomic for a few months and even longer on the script itself.
I know I'm not the best artist in the world, but I decided I wanted to go for it and learn about comic making as I go. That being said I'm open to helpful critique! I know a few things need to be changed, like I'm experimenting with text and dialogue flow so that it's more appealing. I know that I could stand to have more diverse panels too, with different angles, ect, and I'm trying new things. I would really like some advice, as long as its not mean (eek, I'm new at this be gentle ><).
Please have a look if you're interested! I'd love some helpful advice and I'm trying to build my viewer base as well. If you like it, follow us every Thursday for more updates. It's a fantasy themed comic surrounding a unique world, with a new protagonist each chapter. There are LGBT characters and I did include diversity in the cast when it comes to race. I really want to include everyone as much as possible.
Anyway, thanks for taking a look and I can't wait to see what critique you all have.
I have been working on this webcomic for a few months and even longer on the script itself.
I know I'm not the best artist in the world, but I decided I wanted to go for it and learn about comic making as I go. That being said I'm open to helpful critique! I know a few things need to be changed, like I'm experimenting with text and dialogue flow so that it's more appealing. I know that I could stand to have more diverse panels too, with different angles, ect, and I'm trying new things. I would really like some advice, as long as its not mean (eek, I'm new at this be gentle ><).
Please have a look if you're interested! I'd love some helpful advice and I'm trying to build my viewer base as well. If you like it, follow us every Thursday for more updates. It's a fantasy themed comic surrounding a unique world, with a new protagonist each chapter. There are LGBT characters and I did include diversity in the cast when it comes to race. I really want to include everyone as much as possible.
Anyway, thanks for taking a look and I can't wait to see what critique you all have.
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Before I go on, may I ask what program you are making these in?