I'm looking for advice/critique! LGBT themes, diversity, and fantasy~

magp1emagp1e Registered User new member
edited March 2015 in Artist's Corner
Hello, I am new to the forums!

I have been working on this webcomic for a few months and even longer on the script itself.

I know I'm not the best artist in the world, but I decided I wanted to go for it and learn about comic making as I go. That being said I'm open to helpful critique! I know a few things need to be changed, like I'm experimenting with text and dialogue flow so that it's more appealing. I know that I could stand to have more diverse panels too, with different angles, ect, and I'm trying new things. I would really like some advice, as long as its not mean (eek, I'm new at this be gentle ><).
Please have a look if you're interested! I'd love some helpful advice and I'm trying to build my viewer base as well. If you like it, follow us every Thursday for more updates. It's a fantasy themed comic surrounding a unique world, with a new protagonist each chapter. There are LGBT characters and I did include diversity in the cast when it comes to race. I really want to include everyone as much as possible.

Anyway, thanks for taking a look and I can't wait to see what critique you all have.

Iruka on


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    OllieOllie Registered User regular
    Welcome to our forum! Be sure to look around other threads and comments to get a feel for how things go here.

    Before I go on, may I ask what program you are making these in?

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    IrukaIruka Registered User, Moderator Mod Emeritus
    You'll need to post art in this thread if you'd like feedback on your work, flyby posting looking for site hits or followers isnt something we allow.

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