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NotYouNotYou Registered User regular
edited October 2017 in Artist's Corner

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  • IrukaIruka Registered User, Moderator mod
    edited January 2017
    I think the voice acting and pacing is a little slow. The actors arent horrible for the context, but I feel like there's not a ton of contrast in their emotions.

    The visuals are great, but story wise, for such a small tidbit, its a lot of tell and not a lot of show. I would have probably been more interested in watching her get fired.

    Regular coffee joke is actually funny, but on the first view it happens to fast too actually read the text. You only have time to take in "over 9000" and not really enough time to read the next statement. I know its in time with the music, but you should probably just zoom in on one statement so you can take a sec read it.

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  • NotYouNotYou Registered User regular
    Iruka, thanks for the comments and notes! Good points.

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