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LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
edited May 2007 in Artist's Corner
AMIRITE???

I had it in my head to do a realistic interpretation of DBZ, since I've been a fan of the show when it came on fox every Saturday morning at 7am. As exams wind down I finally had time to crank this out last night. Yay.

Goku2.jpg

and the sketch

Goku1.jpg

*waits for iruka to gush about how she likes the b/w sketch better*:P

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  • RaneadosRaneados police apologist you shouldn't have been there, obviouslyRegistered User regular
    edited May 2007
    well, the B/W sketch does look better in relation to the guy's face

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  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
    edited May 2007
    SHUT UP, WHAT DO YOU KNOW ABOUT LIFE???

    *cries*

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  • ScosglenScosglen Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    The hair is pretty straw-like overall, I'd recommend going back in with a larger brush and working on the hair in clumps rather than scratching out each and every follicle.

    I'm also not very convinced by the facial expression, primarily the mouth looks more like a llama chewing on some cud than bellowing forth a blood-chilling kamehameha. Some indication of flaring of the nostrils and the skin fold that runs from above the nostril down to the chin when baring teeth like that might go a way toward helping that.

    The eye on the right is also totally symbolized, find some reference if you need to.

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  • mr0rangemr0range Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Yeah, the mouth/face almost works in B&W ... the colored version looks all stretched out like putty.

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  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
    edited May 2007
    thanks scosglen, something was bothering me about the hair, I overdid it. Dunno why I didn't figure that out sooner.

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  • NightDragonNightDragon 6th Grade Username Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Über-rough:
    Left: desaturated original
    Right: desaturated edit

    Lal.jpg

    Kill all the bright colors, and you ain't got no contrast...especially in the energy-ball. That thing is supposed to be emitting light, right? So why isn't it? The ball is a bit too dark - almost the same tone as his skin.

    Another thing with the same tones are the "fire" around him and the face in the background. Everything blends into everything else...you've got to watch out for the tones as well as the hues.

    Lastly - that eye is all kinds of wrong. Get ye to a reference.

    For elaboration, see visual thing above ^.

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  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
    edited May 2007
    thanks night dragon. as an expression of my gratitude, you can bear my first born son. :P

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  • NightDragonNightDragon 6th Grade Username Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    Lalilulelo wrote: »
    thanks night dragon. as an expression of my gratitude, you can bear my first born son. :P

    oh my god
    i have waited for this
    waited
    for so long

    oh

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  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
    edited May 2007
    If you suddenly get approached by a dove, or get showered in gold, don't be alarmed. I'm just working my magic.

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  • KioliaKiolia Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    I like DBZ.

    Good start...some sat/contrast work and facial touchups would give this a really nice boost. Also, do Vegeta next please.

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  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
    edited May 2007
    I was actually thinking Mr. Piccolo.

    SPECIAL BEAM CANNON!!!

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  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
    edited May 2007
    BYAAAAAAAAA
    Goku2-1.jpg

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  • GodfatherGodfather Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    All you need to do is insert a finger holding down the bottom eyelid and insert a "NYAH NYAH!" caption bubble for comedic gold.

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  • NightDragonNightDragon 6th Grade Username Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    EYELASHES.

    LASHES

    OF THE EYE.

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  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
    edited May 2007
    ..............

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  • GodfatherGodfather Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    EYELASHES.

    LASHES

    OF THE EYE.


    WHAT IS THIS VOODOO MAGICK YOU SPEAK OF?!?

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  • IrukaIruka Registered User, Moderator Mod Emeritus
    edited May 2007
    Yeah, those eyes could some more definition. They don't look like they have lids.

    And, I mean, if you know the black contrast/shape is better in your b&w's, don't whine about it, work it in the color. S'not my fault this happens every time. ND handled that shit pretty awesomely though *h5*

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  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
    edited May 2007
    I wasn't whining. Gawrsh.

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  • IrukaIruka Registered User, Moderator Mod Emeritus
    edited May 2007
    This is all I'm hearing right now ":cry::cry::cry:"

    We need a face for "whining" that one doesn't quite do it.

    I <3 you Lali, its just tough love

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  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
    edited May 2007
    *waits for iruka to gush about how she likes the b/w sketch better*

    that's just my way of saying I missed you. <3

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  • ZeromusZeromus Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    His face is terrifying.

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  • MikeRyuMikeRyu Registered User regular
    edited May 2007
    I don't know what I'm doing here as I don't come in here much and I can't draw for toffee, but as a fan of the Dragonballs I just want to say that purely on a stylistic bases (because I have no business judging drawing skill) I'd like to see the faces a bit different in any future pictures. That Goku scares me a bit too much than he is supposed to. The hair is nice but perhaps a bit too Manga for a "realistic" drawing. I'm looking forward to the sequel. 8-)

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