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Some guy on a cliff with a gun and a jet plane

MutationMutation Registered User new member
edited October 2007 in Artist's Corner
My best photoshop work so far whaddya think?

390desert.jpg

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  • PheezerPheezer Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited October 2007
    The jet seems completely out of place and wrong. The size and placement and orientation of it all seem wrong. Sorry.

    The soldier looks okay though.

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  • KeyraKeyra Registered User new member
    edited October 2007
    Not enough contrast between the foreground and the background, also the lighting is inconsistent with the soldier and the background and the jet. The jet is pretty out of place. The soldier also looks like plastic. Sorry

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  • PheezerPheezer Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited October 2007
    Now that Keyra mentions it, the lighting on the soldier is actually pretty inconsistent, but the ground beneath him looks as out of place as he does so it kind of ties in anyhow.

    You could remove the jet and make the background fit to the foreground a little better and that'd improve matters.

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  • ProjeckProjeck Registered User regular
    edited October 2007
    Wait is this a photograph or a painting?

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  • ProspicienceProspicience The Raven King DenvemoloradoRegistered User regular
    edited October 2007
    Projeck wrote: »
    Wait is this a photograph or a painting?

    I think the actual background is a photo but I thought the soldier looked like a 3d model... I dunno though.

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  • Mai-KeroMai-Kero Registered User regular
    edited October 2007
    The soldier looks like a 3d model from some game.

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  • MutationMutation Registered User new member
    edited October 2007
    Yes, the background is a photo and the soldier is a 3D model I edited in photoshop.

    I also have a version without the jet seen below.

    480desert.jpg

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  • Shiekahn_boyShiekahn_boy Registered User regular
    edited October 2007
    Gun placement to me is off a little. Looks small and somewhat at a side view then at a more 3/4 view.

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  • MaydayMayday Cutting edge goblin tech Registered User regular
    edited October 2007
    Mutation wrote: »
    Yes, the background is a photo and the soldier is a 3D model I edited in photoshop.

    That is... not very impressive.
    Care to share the original pieces?

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  • GrifterGrifter title goes here 32, 64Moderator mod
    edited October 2007
    So... Did you make the 3D model?

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  • MutationMutation Registered User new member
    edited October 2007
    Original Pose coudln't find the background

    dethematrix110012fp5.jpg

    Yeah yeah I know i'm not that great with photoshop I just want to know what I should try to improve on :P

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  • GrifterGrifter title goes here 32, 64Moderator mod
    edited October 2007
    Improve on not making photo/3d model edits.

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