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  • kevin_kevin_ Registered User regular
    edited September 2008
    I really like the energy and perspective of this one, but it still looks a little too out of focus for my taste.

    The guys shoes look really sharp and clean, but then you look at the scarf and his arms and they look really blurry.

    I'd kinda like to see it with the contrast bumped up just for curiosity sake. The design of the robot is really cool and the birds give the image a good sense of height.

    I agree with pretty much everything earth said.

    Awesome work though.

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  • winter_combat_knightwinter_combat_knight Registered User regular
    edited September 2008
    Majane-3.jpg

    That is freakin awesome dude.

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  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
    edited September 2008
    Chow-127-Lalilulelo.jpg

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  • Toji SuzuharaToji Suzuhara Southern CaliforniaRegistered User regular
    edited September 2008
    Your art has improved, but I tend to get distracted by the signatures. They don't add anything to the images.

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    AlphaFlag_200x40.jpg
  • CyberMonkeytron3000CyberMonkeytron3000 Registered User regular
    edited September 2008
    I really like the lion roaring as well- but his jaw looks like it has dislocated. I did a quick paint over of what i mean

    lionpaintoverak2.jpg

    I would also thicken his teeth as they look like they could break bitting into something. The bridge of its nose looks a little flat (although very well rendered), so I would try and make it rounded more.

    I'm loving the robot ones- but as everyone is saying, more contrast could make them pop in your mouth

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  • NightDragonNightDragon 6th Grade Username Registered User regular
    edited September 2008
    Definite improvement.

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  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
    edited September 2008
    I really like the lion roaring as well- but his jaw looks like it has dislocated. I did a quick paint over of what i mean

    crit

    I would also thicken his teeth as they look like they could break bitting into something. The bridge of its nose looks a little flat (although very well rendered), so I would try and make it rounded more.

    I'm loving the robot ones- but as everyone is saying, more contrast could make them pop in your mouth

    I appreciate it. Where were you like, 4 weeks ago?

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  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
    edited September 2008
    Phoenix-color-final.jpg

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  • earthwormadamearthwormadam ancient crust Registered User regular
    edited September 2008
    cool

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  • JohnTWMJohnTWM Registered User regular
    edited September 2008
    *cough*sick*cough*

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  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
    edited September 2008
    Self-Portrait7.jpg
    Self-Portrait8.jpg
    Self-Portrait9.jpg
    Self-Portrait10.jpg

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  • NightDragonNightDragon 6th Grade Username Registered User regular
    edited September 2008
    Excellent colors on that 2nd one!

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  • earthwormadamearthwormadam ancient crust Registered User regular
    edited September 2008
    Man your black and white stuff is pure snazz.

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  • LaliluleloLalilulelo Richmond, VARegistered User regular
    edited October 2008
    YOU'RE pure snazz.
    Ohhhhh burn.
    Anyway, just a quick something I cranked last night.
    Uriel09-30.jpg

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  • PetitePetite Registered User regular
    edited October 2008
    Your work shows such range! I'm not experienced in critiquing art so I don't have much to say. But my, they are beautiful.

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    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
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