Comic criticisms

Kakashei

Hey everyone. I've been a lurker here for a little over a year now, and yesterday I finally bought a wacom tablet with some money I've been saving up. You guys really influenced me to start a comic. I know I'm not that good at drawing yet so please please be easy on me because I know you guys can get pretty critical. So since I know my drawing isn't that great what about the joke?

Edit: oh yeah I wanted to call it "Noob"

Sublimus

I dont know what to believe anymore...

Kakashei

uh ok

Grifter

Funny thing is that your real art isn't that much better than your alt art.

Kakashei

I'm pretty sure that's what I said above?

Ravenshadow

yeah, but it's funnier when grif points it out.

multimoog

Kakashei wrote:

exquisite trash

NightDragon

Who's the alt of?

DefyAllLogic

i don't get it... i mean i get WOW and i get it's leveling system... i don't get the joke.

and is that the gradient fill in various directions on their clothes? i never thought of using that. it give jeans that used look at the buttom.

DarkPrimus

"hvh 10"? And I thought my penmanship sucked.

NightDragon

DarkPrimus wrote:

"hvh 10"? And I thought my penmanship sucked.

I seriously that that was some kind of code until just now when I deciphered the actual writing.

EntrY

I say you ought to put away the pad for a while and study from life etc. - you know the drill.

The joke is not funny. I'm sry, but it's just not funny. Especially when it doesn't have art to support it. I think I know what you wanted to do with the strip, but the faces totally lack expression.

Don't make a comic just to make a comic.

Make a comic when you suddenly feel the touch of God, that will infuse you with the gift of actully writing something funny.

Greatnation

EntrY wrote:

I say you ought to shoot yourself in the face

I think thats what you really meant to say.

EntrY

I'm like an open book...

Pious

Why are they wearing wigs? They have no natrual hair line, just a mop top. Also their heads are about to fall off because the neck doesn't connect to the head. Seriously, study some anatomy. If your like 9 or younger I can forgive you, if your older...start practicing now and don't show anyone your drawings until you get better.

fightinfilipino

i don't get it.




is someone trying to test the patience of the AC folks tonight? like, are you guys running a test or something?

Rye

I don't know why you guys are complaining. This is quite possibly the best comic submission I've seen in a while.

Hear me out:

• No Comic Sans
• No PS Filters
• ....Dynamic Panel Layout?
• He redrew each character on EVERY PAGE. If that doesn't earn him a caramel apple, I don't know what does.
• No mispellings
• Good grammar
• All primary colors and even green... that's the sweetest pallette I've ever seen
• Look at the line quality! It's thick and thin randomly
• Speech bubbles. I need arrows to tell me who's talking. Sometimes I ask my friends to point to themselves when they're talking so I don't get confused.
• I hate punchlines. Why end a perfectly good joke when the reader can fill it in for themselves? For example, I can imagine the red shirted guy saying something at the end like "I'm gonna go have sex with my gf (which you don't have). Go buy a comb, Dennis. [hums the baseline to a Gorillaz song]"

Or maybe the yellow shirt kid pauses momentarily and says "we're out of toilet paper so I shit on your towel."

See how much better that makes the comic?

Creambun 007

This comic makes me cry.




In the bad way.

Obiwan

Kakashei wrote:

Hey everyone. I've been a lurker here for a little over a year now, and yesterday I finally bought a wacom tablet with some money I've been saving up.

We need to figure out a way to prevent you from ever saving up money. Cuz you spend it on stupid shit that you possibly couldn't use properly. It's like you spending money on a whore of the opposite sex after realizing that you're gay. Like buying a gun when you have no hands. You should have someone make all your purchases for you and to be there to punch you in your scrote everytime you suggest something you want to buy.

srsizzy

What a waste of a perfectly good tablet. Starving children could have eaten it. I suppose their shit would look better than this.

NightDragon

So then, I guess, buying the tablet hasn't all gone to waste...as long as he can find some starving waifs to feed said tablet to, then replace his comic with said waifs' fecal matter.

science wins again

Angel_of_Bacon

I think the next person who wants to make an troll alt to flame bait flame week will soon find that alt to be the only account they'll be able to use.

tynic

srsizzy

NightDragon wrote:

So then, I guess, buying the tablet hasn't all gone to waste...as long as he can find some starving waifs to feed said tablet to, then replace his comic with said waifs' fecal matter.

science wins again

It's contaminated now. For all we know one of those kids will become a genius, and we don't want to infect the children with "suckitus articus". Have a heart.

Tam

srsizzy wrote:

NightDragon wrote:

So then, I guess, buying the tablet hasn't all gone to waste...as long as he can find some starving waifs to feed said tablet to, then replace his comic with said waifs' fecal matter.

science wins again

It's contaminated now. For all we know one of those kids will become a genius, and we don't want to infect the children with "suckitus articus". Have a heart.

ars fellatiosus

Kalynar

grifter81 wrote:

Funny thing is that your real art isn't that much better than your alt art.

Best burn in this thread.

Grifter

NightDragon wrote:

Who's the alt of?

Prospicience

Grifter

Angel_of_Bacon wrote:

I think the next person who wants to make an troll alt to flame bait flame week will soon find that alt to be the only account they'll be able to use.

I like it.

Metalbourne

grifter81 wrote:

Angel_of_Bacon wrote:

I think the next person who wants to make an troll alt to flame bait flame week will soon find that alt to be the only account they'll be able to use.

I like it.

I think all the alts should be exposed

Grifter

Well, byron is...byron.

Ape2001

tynic wrote:

Lly

...

erisian pope

Ape2001 wrote:

tynic wrote:

There's a reason I don't do a webcomic.

Lly

Because there isn't any paper known to man strong enough to contain such awesometude?

erisian pope

I...


You have confused me, sir or madame.

Spectre-x

Creambun 007

Spectre-x

Maybe because you are a girly-pants-wearing prancing ninny candy dandy, Creambun.

Have you ever thought of that before? Hmm?

Creambun 007

your mother wears... girl... pant...


I hate you.

Spectre-x

It is only natural to hate those superior to you.

Creambun 007

Since when did you get a pair! I gotta tell you, this new, improved, A-hole spectre is the kinda guy I could get on board with!

and no, i'm not talking about gay sex.