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Feudal Poodle Doodle Thread

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  • McAllenMcAllen Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    which lineart looks the best? I used the pen tool in photoshop on the last one, but for some reason I like the lineart first on the left one more, I don't know why. It looks more organic, but I can't put my finger on it. Any theories?

    Last one on the right is supposed to be the guy from oldboy.

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  • Angel_of_BaconAngel_of_Bacon Moderator mod
    edited December 2006
    I like the third one the best, but you're right, the lines on the first are more natural looking. You should see if you can freehand something like the last one, trying to get the same kind of sharp lines and contrast of hard and soft edges like you've got there, but incorporate a little more line variation like you get from the first.

    green.jpg

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  • McAllenMcAllen Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Ah, okay. I *KNEW* it has something to do with line variation. I'll keep practicing. Thanks for your advice, Bacon.

    I like your painting. It reminds me alot of Felwood in World of Warcraft because everything is kind of a green/brown.

    What happened to your site storage, btw? You used to have alot more images then you do now. I ask because I used to look at them for reference on how you work.

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  • Angel_of_BaconAngel_of_Bacon Moderator mod
    edited December 2006
    Unfortunately, universities don't continue to give people tons of free webspace after they graduate. :P So, all the old stuff is no longer up.

    And I don't play WoW, I know that makes me the social pariah of the season. :?

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  • ScopsScops Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Don't look. Just keep scrolling down until you've passed my post.

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    portrait2oq7.jpg

    These are two of three portraits from class, following a medical theme. Also note I didn't have time to finish the second one. I've really got to get in to a regular drawing habit, I'm never going to get better this way...

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  • MavlockMavlock Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
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    Boobas are all screwed...

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  • tynictynic PICNIC BADASS Registered User, ClubPA regular
    edited December 2006
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  • no_toastno_toast Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    For those interested in Color theory it's easy to start from Wikipedia.

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  • Grim OutlookGrim Outlook Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
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  • SublimusSublimus Artist. nowhereRegistered User regular
    edited December 2006
    AoB: Is that.... a tiny man walking on christmas ornaments?

    Ahh, TOTP POST IT DOODLE!

    Robot, GO!

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  • MossMoss Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
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  • TyphusTyphus Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    hows this one guys?

    SuperheroStance.jpg

    I'm not sure what the Japanese says. My girlfriend bought a thing with it on at some christmas fair so I just copied it onto the picture

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  • MagicToasterMagicToaster JapanRegistered User regular
    edited December 2006
    His torso and head are really small... or his legs and arms are really long. The Japanese seems to read Jinsei... and the 'se' is really poorly written.

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  • TyphusTyphus Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Yeah its the legs that are long I think, I could see that when I scanned it but I'm too lazy to do anything now.

    What does Jinsei mean? Sorry about the poorly written part, I only had the one reference which I think I was fairly accurate to. I just liked the look of the calligraphy (Would that be the right word?)

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  • MagicToasterMagicToaster JapanRegistered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Without kanji or a context to place the word in, it's kinda hard to say what it means. Unlike English, Japanese is full of homonyms; words that sound alike but are spelled diffrently. When a word is written in hiragana, as you did, it could be anything... what's gonna give it definition is Kanji.

    Just in case you don't know what I'm talking about:

    Hiragana is a simplified writing system.
    Kanji is a chinese derived symbol system.

    Writing じんせい could be the simplified version of writing the following kanji:

    人性 - Human Nature
    人生 - Life
    仁政 - Benevolent rule (had to look this one in the dictionary, might not be acurate)

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  • The One Dark KnightThe One Dark Knight Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Yay! I tried speedpainting.


    With a mouse.


    Took me like 30-40 mins to do this. I have no idea. Looks kind of like Shadow of the Colossus.

    speedpaintfz9.jpg

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  • DeeLockDeeLock Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Looks kind of like Shadow of the Colossus.

    Huh?

    I thought it looked more like the Iron Giant.

    Arn't the things from SotC fuzzy?

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  • The One Dark KnightThe One Dark Knight Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    DeeLock wrote:
    Looks kind of like Shadow of the Colossus.

    Huh?

    I thought it looked more like the Iron Giant.

    Arn't the things from SotC fuzzy?

    Hm.


    Actually, pretty true. Guess it kind of does look more like a robot.

    At any rate, I have no idea, it just popped out of my head.

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  • flipsidezwflipsidezw Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Well, I'm having fun after I took a hiatus from this board. Soon I'll have some stuff to drop in a thread and have you guys crit/flame me on. Until then, more practice. Practice practice practice.
    sketch9co0.jpg

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  • RavenshadowRavenshadow Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    needs some more attention paid to the cloak, face and hair.

    Look at some cloaks or loose jackets or something.

    trying to get speed painting to work.

    tank.jpg
    "Lucy! You got some splainin' to do!"

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  • stewizbadstewizbad Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    needs some more attention paid to the cloak, face and hair.

    Look at some cloaks or loose jackets or something.

    trying to get speed painting to work.

    tank.jpg
    "Lucy! You got some splainin' to do!"


    I like the colors you used, that with the shading the tank really pops out!

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  • Lexx KYSDSLexx KYSDS Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Man, that Japanese confuses the hell out of me.

    The first character is definitely 'ji,' and I believe the second would be 'e' not 'n.' They look very similar, but 'e' has a bit of extra stuff on top, as follows:

    ん (n)  vs え (e)


    That third one though... what the hell? It looks like a katakana 'sa' (サ), but hiragana and katakana are never used within a single word. It also looks like a backwards 'ya' (や). And that last one does look the most like 'i'.

    In summary, I bet that's not even a word. I bet whoever designed the thing your ladyfriend got either used a font that substituted random Japanese hiragana and katakana characters for letters, or just arbitrarily picked a few he or she thought were cool and slapped them on.

    I hate that D:<

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  • SublimusSublimus Artist. nowhereRegistered User regular
    edited December 2006
    needs some more attention paid to the cloak, face and hair.

    Look at some cloaks or loose jackets or something.

    trying to get speed painting to work.

    tank.jpg

    Im no color expert, but this needs some work. The tank really blends into the background because there is nothing past the midtones. You need some lighter tones here and there. Imply the lightning as a light source, maybe. And while your at it, tone that lightning down, because it clashes with the main focus since its so bright!

    Oh yeah. And it looks like you just used red and then moved the back back and forth on the slider. No bueno! Get some color variance in there, even if you want to keep it monochrome you can change the hues quite a bit, and they will still read as red.

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  • RavenshadowRavenshadow Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Sublimus wrote:
    Im no color expert, but this needs some work. The tank really blends into the background because there is nothing past the midtones. You need some lighter tones here and there. Imply the lightning as a light source, maybe. And while your at it, tone that lightning down, because it clashes with the main focus since its so bright!

    Oh yeah. And it looks like you just used red and then moved the back back and forth on the slider. No bueno! Get some color variance in there, even if you want to keep it monochrome you can change the hues quite a bit, and they will still read as red.

    yeah, there's nothing past the midtones 'cause I wanted it to be night like. So I tried not to go very bright. I'm not sure how to do night scenes without keeping the contrast low. The lightning does suck... I had no idea how to render it.

    As for the hues I don't ever move the slider back and forth when pickin' colors. What I did was started with a gradient in the background between dark red and orangish yellow and sampled colors from the background as I went brighter.

    And now that I've written that out I can see why that would make everything blend into the background.

    Ah well, thanks for makin' me think more about it. Lesson learned.

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  • MagicToasterMagicToaster JapanRegistered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Lexx KYSDS wrote:
    Man, that Japanese confuses the hell out of me.

    The first character is definitely 'ji,' and I believe the second would be 'e' not 'n.' They look very similar, but 'e' has a bit of extra stuff on top, as follows:

    ん (n)  vs え (e)


    That third one though... what the hell? It looks like a katakana 'sa' (サ), but hiragana and katakana are never used within a single word. It also looks like a backwards 'ya' (や). And that last one does look the most like 'i'.

    In summary, I bet that's not even a word. I bet whoever designed the thing your ladyfriend got either used a font that substituted random Japanese hiragana and katakana characters for letters, or just arbitrarily picked a few he or she thought were cool and slapped them on.

    I hate that D:<

    Lexxy, have I ever told you that I love your input? After looking at that second character, I agree; it's be 'e'. However, the seccond character is so horrible I can't make it out at all.

    Hah! Maybe it says Jessey! That would make me laugh out loud if someone tatooed this on their arm.

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  • EhmaviscaEhmavisca Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Hi guys, I'm new here.

    Dicking around.
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  • supergluesuperglue Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Lexx KYSDS wrote:
    Man, that Japanese confuses the hell out of me.

    The first character is definitely 'ji,' and I believe the second would be 'e' not 'n.' They look very similar, but 'e' has a bit of extra stuff on top, as follows:

    ん (n)  vs え (e)


    That third one though... what the hell? It looks like a katakana 'sa' (サ), but hiragana and katakana are never used within a single word. It also looks like a backwards 'ya' (や). And that last one does look the most like 'i'.

    In summary, I bet that's not even a word. I bet whoever designed the thing your ladyfriend got either used a font that substituted random Japanese hiragana and katakana characters for letters, or just arbitrarily picked a few he or she thought were cool and slapped them on.

    I hate that D:<

    Lexxy, have I ever told you that I love your input? After looking at that second character, I agree; it's be 'e'. However, the seccond character is so horrible I can't make it out at all.

    Hah! Maybe it says Jessey! That would make me laugh out loud if someone tatooed this on their arm.

    Lord Have Mercy?

    http://images.google.com/images?q=jesse+katsopolis&ndsp=20&svnum=10&hl=en&lr=&start=0&sa=N

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Arrgh! I don't know if I can color this. I must finish it, it's for a friend!

    spanka.jpg

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  • AlyceInWonderlandAlyceInWonderland Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    The only thing is that the legs are a bit short.

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    The only thing is that the legs are a bit short.

    Outside of the imperfection margin? I ask only because my friend specifically asked for a short girl. Also, how should I approach coloring this?

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  • AlyceInWonderlandAlyceInWonderland Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Well, then you could probably shorten the arms a tad which will still make her look short and more anatomically correct ;)

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    Well, then you could probably shorten the arms a tad which will still make her look short and more anatomically correct ;)

    Err..I think I'll lengthen the legs a bot. Those arms would be a bear to rework:oops:

    Well, I'll have to color it somehow. Can someone OC with me tomorrow and point out stuff as I color?

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  • Angel_of_BaconAngel_of_Bacon Moderator mod
    edited December 2006
    Small update on this. That foot don't look right.
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    I like that Christmas ornament idea, Moss. It makes it seem almost 30% more whimsical than before. :D

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  • PiousPious Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
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    Went from doodle to more finisihed, but not really finished.

    Thats badassified bacon.

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  • RavenshadowRavenshadow Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    foolin' around
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    TOTP :evil:

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    The torso's really off, Raven, it's too skinny and the belly button is a bit far down. Unless part of the arm's there too, the hands are too long.

    Ugh, I can't color this worth crap.

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  • wakkawawakkawa Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    I like the lineart, but the colors are way too, muddy? I dont know, they need some more color in them

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  • KalynarKalynar Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    wak, that second one freaking rocks. desktoppage. Her knee throws me a little though, its so 'there' when he's just, not. but it still rocks.

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    My hands! My horrible human hands!
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  • XALXAL Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    you always have AMAZING stuff wakkawa

    LOVE that shading

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited December 2006
    wakkawa wrote:
    I like the lineart, but the colors are way too, muddy? I dont know, they need some more color in them

    awesomeness

    Thanks. I just barely got a toehold on anatomy and now there's this big fucking color mountain in front of me. *Sigh*.

    Your stuff's awesome as always, Mr. Wakkawa. Especially the couple there; pretty sexy. Wait, is this the first one with a guy and a girl? Cuz most your work's usually got two ladies. Not complaining on either side.

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