Munkus BeaverYou don't have to attend every argument you are invited to.Philosophy: Stoicism. Politics: Democratic SocialistRegistered User, ClubPAregular
edited August 2009
I can't help but look at that girl and think that her left hand has been amputated. Her arm disappears in her hair and it doesn't look like that hand appears anywhere.
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I can't help but look at that girl and think that her left hand has been amputated. Her arm disappears in her hair and it doesn't look like that hand appears anywhere.
I was actually thinking of drawing some chubby ladies, so I might do it if I have some time,
i have a couple deadlines I have to hit, this was all a rare moment of me getting time to do something that isn't client work
there are ups and downs to doing this for my job
the ups are, i draw for a living in my room in my jammies
the downs are, I rarely have time to draw for myself anymore which was always one of my favorite pass times
also, you don't get a chance to really push yourself to improve when you're doing client work
they picked you for the skillset you already have, you don't have room to experiment, you just do the same old same.
okay enough of that, here are some edits
I think I got most of the big problems you guys saw
tam, the client for this one wanted the hair to be curly at the bottom/middle going to straight
which is exactly what would happen if a girl had hair this long that had some wave or curl to it
it would be too heavy to hold it at the top, but it'd be mega wavy at the bottom
trust me, i used to have hair down past my ass. (it's a pain)
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NappuccinoSurveyor of Things and StuffRegistered Userregular
edited August 2009
I love this thread.
You all make me feel warm and fuzzy in side.
Plus some other emotions that are weird and deeply confusing.
youve done some pretty stange things with the arm that is straight. that point onthe shoulder would feel more natural as a flowing curve.. right now it doesnt make much sense.. And youve created the dreaded pinch where your contours both insert at almost the exact same place(parrallel to each other) in the elbow.. That really never happens and it breaks the flow. Stops the eye from traveling through the arm.. and nothing exciting is happening at her elbow.
Since you tend to stray more towards simplfication.. a suggestion is maybe make the back of the arm a straight line and let the other side be flowing curves for a nice contrast.
I just realized that pointy shoulder is actually shoulder covered by hair. a cast shadow that curves over the form of the deltoid or shoulder would help convice
youve also put the indication of the ankle bone on her left foot to low..
(medial condyle of the tibia) Im sorry I cant stop my brain from doing this now that ive learned the names
tam, the client for this one wanted the hair to be curly at the bottom/middle going to straight
which is exactly what would happen if a girl had hair this long that had some wave or curl to it
it would be too heavy to hold it at the top, but it'd be mega wavy at the bottom
trust me, i used to have hair down past my ass. (it's a pain)
Alright. I guess I just didn't find it pleasing to look at.
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MetalbourneInside a cluster b personalityRegistered Userregular
1. The garter she has going on is working all wonky. Garters are taut, made of elastic material that holds her long stockings up to her corset, that way they don't fall down. The way you've drawn it looks almost like you weren't sure what you wanted it to do, as if you were torn between the elasticity and making it adhere to gravity. The way you have it now, it almost follows the curve of her leg. But the thing about garters is that they have a way to adjust them, and the elasticity to keep that way, but also are almost like a piece of thread in regard to gravity and will not adhere to body shape when not stretched. Sitting like that would make the garter hang loosely.
2. What's up with her crazy melon tits? I am all for the big knockers, believe you me, but not when they're rock hard. They're like a couple of halves of a soccer ball sitting on her ribcage under her skin. Jugs need to be soft, dude! They're water balloons, adhere those love-apples to gravity! Also, her left (our right) one is totally way larger than the other. Substantially. I mean, that happens with all chicks, but that hooter she has there is getting freaky-large comparatively.
In other news, boobies.
I used my mouse for this because I was frankly too lazy to get up and plug in my tablet, which is two feet away, but you get the idea.
Corsets like that push the breasts up and round them out, they are intended to make your breasts look like they're overflowing. hence vivacious.
breasts don't cave in like that when wearing a corset, if the corset fits you. it's unsexy, it defeats the purpose of the corset, which minimizes the waist and pushes the bust up.
Also her breasts are not that much different in size, her left boob is partially obscured by a piece of hair
i guess i could fix that a bit so it doesn't look like it caves in, but i just... i really don't see how it looks that way.
even if one IS bigger than the other, guess what? The majority of REAL women have one breast bigger than the other!
also this thread has been really friggen annoying me with people being like "i don't like the size of her boobs, i don't like this i don't like that, girl's butt is big"
i don't care what you LIKE or what you DON'T LIKE as far as size of a woman's breasts go, I care about whether or not the form and anatomy feel fluid and as though it could work with the woman's body type.
girls come in different sizes and shapes
I have a friend with triple D knockers and a 24 waist.
it HAPPENS
it's not ANATOMICALLY WRONG you just find it unappealing.
well guess what?
I can't please everyone.
So you don't like giant tits in a corset? awesome, sorry to hear it.
as a girl, the fucking pickiness of guys in this thread is getting on my nerves.
crit the construction, crit the anatomy, don't crit the fact that you don't like her ass or titties or her hair unless it is PHYSICALLY IMPOSSIBLE
i'm not asking you to date the girl, jesus
thanks.
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MetalbourneInside a cluster b personalityRegistered Userregular
The upper arm farther from the viewer is longer than the one closest, I think. Even accounting for the shoulder hidden by the hair.
I don't know if I want to say the femoral section of the leg is too long, but the farther bent knee (maybe even the closer one) is too pointy- there's more surface area to a bent knee than what is suggested. Also, I think you're a bit beyond the limits of possibility with how narrow the ankles get- it looks like she has no Achilles tendon.
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thanks for the crits burrr!
her wrist could be broken?
Sorry.
That partially-curly partially-straight thing isn't looking too good to me. I'd recommend you go with one or the other.
hertz donut?
also, Beav,
I'm totally digging these broads you be drawin'
May I suggest you get a real thick, dark-skinned one in here a la Queen Latifah from Chicago?
i have a couple deadlines I have to hit, this was all a rare moment of me getting time to do something that isn't client work
there are ups and downs to doing this for my job
the ups are, i draw for a living in my room in my jammies
the downs are, I rarely have time to draw for myself anymore which was always one of my favorite pass times
also, you don't get a chance to really push yourself to improve when you're doing client work
they picked you for the skillset you already have, you don't have room to experiment, you just do the same old same.
okay enough of that, here are some edits
I think I got most of the big problems you guys saw
tam, the client for this one wanted the hair to be curly at the bottom/middle going to straight
which is exactly what would happen if a girl had hair this long that had some wave or curl to it
it would be too heavy to hold it at the top, but it'd be mega wavy at the bottom
trust me, i used to have hair down past my ass. (it's a pain)
You all make me feel warm and fuzzy in side.
Plus some other emotions that are weird and deeply confusing.
I'm talking about Nappuccino, of course.
Since you tend to stray more towards simplfication.. a suggestion is maybe make the back of the arm a straight line and let the other side be flowing curves for a nice contrast.
I just realized that pointy shoulder is actually shoulder covered by hair. a cast shadow that curves over the form of the deltoid or shoulder would help convice
youve also put the indication of the ankle bone on her left foot to low..
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Alright. I guess I just didn't find it pleasing to look at.
She can sit on my fleshy candle!
Is appetizing really the word you are looking for?
d-robe wants to eat my fleshy candle!
In retrospect, I should have said appealing.
:winky:
1. The garter she has going on is working all wonky. Garters are taut, made of elastic material that holds her long stockings up to her corset, that way they don't fall down. The way you've drawn it looks almost like you weren't sure what you wanted it to do, as if you were torn between the elasticity and making it adhere to gravity. The way you have it now, it almost follows the curve of her leg. But the thing about garters is that they have a way to adjust them, and the elasticity to keep that way, but also are almost like a piece of thread in regard to gravity and will not adhere to body shape when not stretched. Sitting like that would make the garter hang loosely.
2. What's up with her crazy melon tits? I am all for the big knockers, believe you me, but not when they're rock hard. They're like a couple of halves of a soccer ball sitting on her ribcage under her skin. Jugs need to be soft, dude! They're water balloons, adhere those love-apples to gravity! Also, her left (our right) one is totally way larger than the other. Substantially. I mean, that happens with all chicks, but that hooter she has there is getting freaky-large comparatively.
In other news, boobies.
I used my mouse for this because I was frankly too lazy to get up and plug in my tablet, which is two feet away, but you get the idea.
Corsets like that push the breasts up and round them out, they are intended to make your breasts look like they're overflowing. hence vivacious.
breasts don't cave in like that when wearing a corset, if the corset fits you. it's unsexy, it defeats the purpose of the corset, which minimizes the waist and pushes the bust up.
Also her breasts are not that much different in size, her left boob is partially obscured by a piece of hair
i guess i could fix that a bit so it doesn't look like it caves in, but i just... i really don't see how it looks that way.
even if one IS bigger than the other, guess what? The majority of REAL women have one breast bigger than the other!
also this thread has been really friggen annoying me with people being like "i don't like the size of her boobs, i don't like this i don't like that, girl's butt is big"
i don't care what you LIKE or what you DON'T LIKE as far as size of a woman's breasts go, I care about whether or not the form and anatomy feel fluid and as though it could work with the woman's body type.
girls come in different sizes and shapes
I have a friend with triple D knockers and a 24 waist.
it HAPPENS
it's not ANATOMICALLY WRONG you just find it unappealing.
well guess what?
I can't please everyone.
So you don't like giant tits in a corset? awesome, sorry to hear it.
as a girl, the fucking pickiness of guys in this thread is getting on my nerves.
crit the construction, crit the anatomy, don't crit the fact that you don't like her ass or titties or her hair unless it is PHYSICALLY IMPOSSIBLE
i'm not asking you to date the girl, jesus
thanks.
hehe
Beav's better boobs.
Beav's better boobs better build up to B's.
...I was wondering if maybe, I could hang out with your friend?
hahaha she's super picky
she's also a fucking supermodel ... bitch
... i'm kidding, i love jenn, she's a sweetheart
I don't know if I want to say the femoral section of the leg is too long, but the farther bent knee (maybe even the closer one) is too pointy- there's more surface area to a bent knee than what is suggested. Also, I think you're a bit beyond the limits of possibility with how narrow the ankles get- it looks like she has no Achilles tendon.
Maybe you should draw some hunky beefcake speedo drawings so dudes will appreciate the hot girl drawings they are getting currently a bit more?
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