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  • Kamikaze PurpleKamikaze Purple Registered User
    edited February 2009
    Robcham wrote: »
    hourly comics!

    I lol'd at "worst asian ever"

    ...because I am actually the worst asian ever.

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  • crawdaddiocrawdaddio Tacoma, WARegistered User, ClubPA
    edited February 2009
    I dunno, I'd think this guy'd at least be in the running for worst asian ever.

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    Try putting your donger in a dishwasher and see how that comes out.
  • NibCromNibCrom Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    No wonder Star Wars was such a huge hit. They wanted to stop thinking about that guy.

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  • McGibsMcGibs TorontoRegistered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Updated version
    spaceman-run2.gif

    of this
    spaceman-run.gif

    spaceman-new.jpg

    And if anyone's interested, heres a super alpha-build video (the only graphics I'd done so far the player and the particle effects)
    http://mcgibs.iseenothing.com/junk/capsized/capsized-01.wmv

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    website_header.jpg
  • NotASenatorNotASenator Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    that looks better over all, but I liked seeing the dude's head in the helmet.

    EDIT: Hey, that video is looking good. You guys are further along than I thought.

    How many programmers did you say are working on it?

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  • McGibsMcGibs TorontoRegistered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Its just the two of us. so... one.

    I might add his head back in later, after I see how it looks ingame.

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    website_header.jpg
  • ShiboeShiboe Registered User
    edited February 2009
    @pious: I still think you should have went with my suggestion, but I do like the floor graphics and the skull looks pretty good. The body perspective problems still remain in my eyes though.

    @obilex: Toji beat me to the punch, but ya, that looks pretty muddy, could use some colors in the skin to liven it up, but don't ask me beyond that.

    @grifter: I haven't really liked any version of that logo. =(
    I don't think it's recognizable enough. At the very least it should take a few moments to register, then once it has popped in your mind you should see it almot instantly from then on. Every time I look at it, I have to struggle and go letter by letter, and it's still at the end like "ok well I guess I can find all the letters with some effort." I think 2-3 seconds for recognition is about the tops you want to aim for, after that it just becomes frustrating, and currently, at least for me, it's around 15-20 seconds.
    McGibs wrote: »
    Updated version
    spaceman-run2.gif

    of this
    spaceman-run.gif

    spaceman-new.jpg
    And if anyone's interested, heres a super alpha-build video (the only graphics I'd done so far the player and the particle effects)
    http://mcgibs.iseenothing.com/junk/capsized/capsized-01.wmv

    I love the physics and controls you have going in that. Looks like it could be really fun! Can't wait to see where this goes. ;D

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  • srsizzysrsizzy Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    I agree with NAC about the guy's head, Gibs, but that game is lookin' awesome.

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    BRO LET ME GET REAL WITH YOU AND SAY THAT MY FINGERS ARE PREPPED AND HOT LIKE THE SURFACE OF THE SUN TO BRING RADICAL BEATS SO SMOOTH THE SHIT WILL BE MEDICINAL-GRADE TRIPNASTY MAKING ALL BRAINWAVES ROLL ON THE SURFACE OF A BALLS-FEISTY NEURAL RAINBOW CRACKA-LACKIN' YOUR PERCEPTION OF THE HERE-NOW SPACE-TIME SITUATION THAT ALL OF LIFE BE JAMMED UP IN THROUGH THE UNIVERSAL FLOW BEATS
  • TheBogTheBog Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    It's no Sword Dog.
    It's awesome, though. Looks like it'd be great multiplayer, what with all the flying around.

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  • NotASenatorNotASenator Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Man my game is so boring in comparison. :p

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  • WastingPenguinsWastingPenguins Registered User
    edited February 2009
    workin on this

    TFLR

    TH5B

    TD7C

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  • PROXPROX Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Man i wish i could give sword dog that level of polish. Im programming and arting.

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  • crawdaddiocrawdaddio Tacoma, WARegistered User, ClubPA
    edited February 2009
    lfish.jpg

    Another worksheet doodle. I know I'm spending far too much time on these, but that's what happens when you tell an ADHD perfectionist to put a couple of drawings in a worksheet.

    EDIT: I guess it could stand to be a teeny bit bigger...

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    Try putting your donger in a dishwasher and see how that comes out.
  • TheBogTheBog Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Chainkatana I guess.

    rom283.jpg

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  • the_monarch23the_monarch23 Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    That's wicked Bog. My contribution for the day. Igor, or "Iggy" as his friends call him. Part of a story I'm writing that's like a childrens book but isn't.

    Igorcopy.jpg

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    "Gott in himmel! Fritz, vee haff named our car after ein lady-garten."
    ~Jeremy Clarkson
  • MykonosMykonos Registered User
    edited February 2009
    nice clean line art monarch! good job

    rough composition sketch. need to makesure perspective and porportions are in order before marching forth.

    Despina3-1.jpg

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    "I was born; six gun in my hand; behind the gun; I make my final stand"~Bad Company
  • the_monarch23the_monarch23 Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Mykonos wrote: »
    nice clean line art monarch! good job

    rough composition sketch. need to makesure perspective and porportions are in order before marching forth.

    [IMG]Girl with gun hopefully :)[/IMG]

    Thanks Myk, I love seeing your stuff come to life. Sadly line art is pretty much all I'm good at! I'm trying to foray into digital painting, bought a book and everything, but it's very different from traditional painting. I just have trouble layering colors in photoshop. It was funny, I actually have been using my tablet so often lately that I was drawing the other day, screwed up a line and moved my fingers to hit ctrl+z.... and realized I was drawing on real paper... with real pencil. Life needs an undo key!

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    "Gott in himmel! Fritz, vee haff named our car after ein lady-garten."
    ~Jeremy Clarkson
  • winter_combat_knightwinter_combat_knight Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    just a landscape scene ive been working on in photoshop. need to push the greyscale study further. Also did a few colour tests.

    2u5arte.jpg

    EDIT: Also may as well post this up. Did all these during leno tonight. The top pic i did while he was interviewing some couple from some tv show in america. i cant remember who they are though.

    1tn6kg.jpg

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  • F87F87 So Say We All Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    I would try pushing the midground back a little further, atmospherically.

    Some random FOTOshop shit:

    sd1.jpg

    sd2.jpg

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  • NibCromNibCrom Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    That's a nice fish crawdaddio.

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  • F87F87 So Say We All Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    more random stuff:
    sd3.jpg

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  • GodfatherGodfather Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    That chick in Frank's second-to-last post has some rude titties man.

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    0WBv0.png
  • TheBogTheBog Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Yes, the perspective is way off, but I don't think putting his leg behind the cloth would salvage anything at this point. Just think of them as separate pictures I guess?

    rom284.jpg

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  • misosoupmisosoup Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    that guy on the right, bog, has one dodgy neck (or perceived neck) area, his shoulders would have to end right where the cloak takes over so his neck looks hella long,

    also the guy on the lefts head looks off to me, like the top and the bottom don't quite gell (jell? gel?), plus the torso is completely unreadable for me, but that might just be me

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  • KochikensKochikens Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Calling this done. See errors. Bah. Started it a long time ago, just wanted it donnneee. Would love advice for next time though!


    zombiedone.png

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  • winter_combat_knightwinter_combat_knight Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Just a few anatomy problems which let it down. but thats something everyone always works on. Will get better with time. I think his left arm looks a little unfinished. Adding a little more cleaner details in like you've done with the face will make it look a lot better, i think.

    i think it would be funny if you had the dude holding a meat pie, and he's trying to put sauce over it, but makes a mess all over himself. Thats happened to me a lot at the footy.

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  • CyberMonkeytron3000CyberMonkeytron3000 Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    I'm still making babies

    manmachinewip4pl9.jpg

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  • MustangMustang Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Truely awesome, but I cannot help but ask where are the nipples?

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  • NotASenatorNotASenator Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    interior nipples

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  • CyberMonkeytron3000CyberMonkeytron3000 Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Robo babies from the future have no need for nipples.... Or maybe they need for nothing but nipples... The future is a hard thing to predict.

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  • Grim OutlookGrim Outlook Registered User
    edited February 2009
    so valentine's day is coming up. my girlfriend really likes the simpsons so i drew this up as a sort of valentine.

    VALENTINEFULLNOWORDS-1.jpg

    i was really going for the simpsons art style, do you think i got it down right?

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  • MustangMustang Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    It was the first thing I thought of, so that would be a yes.

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  • winter_combat_knightwinter_combat_knight Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    And i was about to go off at you for stealing matt groenings drawing style, so yes :)

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  • misosoupmisosoup Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    I think you have the style down pretty much, but I think the arms could use a lot of work. He dosen't tend to curve arms like that unless he's drawing children, and even then, when they have a bend at that sort of angle he tends to give them elbows.

    I tried to find some good examples but all I could find was cartoon porn really. (seriously, google Marge Simpson without safe search on D: the horror)

    here's kinda what I mean;
    marge-simpson.jpg

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    APTBSsig.jpg
  • NightDragonNightDragon 6th Grade Username Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Also, the arms are generally thicker and the torsos shorter. You actually went for the more "correct" proportions in this, but if you want it to look more accurate to the Simpsons style, I'd suggest tweaking those a bit, and getting rid of her collarbones. Also make her neck a *bit* shorter.

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  • CyberMonkeytron3000CyberMonkeytron3000 Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Grim- I would also maybe work on the confidence of your line work (or the lack of it)- your lines are quite scratchy and you can tell you have used many small strokes rather than fewer longer ones. Try tracing over the line drawing you have and smooth out the lines.

    manmachinewip5ib3.jpg

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  • the_monarch23the_monarch23 Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Very cool, cyber. Can you push the power button to make it stop crying? :)

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    "Gott in himmel! Fritz, vee haff named our car after ein lady-garten."
    ~Jeremy Clarkson
  • winter_combat_knightwinter_combat_knight Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Rough sketch i did tonight in photosop. Planning on painting this on canvas (hence why not too much time placed in details). Im wanting to experiment with painting directly onto a canvas which has a base colour of entirely black. This method was used for the original batman animated series. I have always wanted to give it a go. The pic is supposed to be based on Majoras Mask, but with a little of a gothic theme to it. i imagine it looking like the castlevania artowork, but it will definately not look anywhere near as good :)

    EDIT: Uploaded wrong one...
    23ll0sw.jpg

    Proper one

    211jk05.jpg

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  • KochikensKochikens Registered User regular
    edited February 2009
    Seeing if I can still draw animu, drew a friends Gaiaonline avatar.

    siryncropped.png

    Turns out I still can.

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  • ShiboeShiboe Registered User
    edited February 2009
    WCK:
    I really like the setup you have going there, nice composition to me at least. Your lines and such still seem really rough and haphazard though. Too many tiny unsure strokes. Also, I really have no clue as to what's going on (I stopped at ocarina of time) but maybe link should be looking up at what I assume to be the boss? maybe in a bit more of an action pose too. Anyways, good luck!

    Cybermonkey:
    I love your rendering, always do, but the baby bothers me. The really heavy facial creases, the chest, the hard edge on his right knee, it looks more like a rubber suit than skin, but it's weird. Maybe it is a rubber suit? He's a cyborg baby? I guess it's that there's not enough pushing it one way or the other for me that is bothersome. Maybe that's a good thing.

    Kochi:
    Looks like deviantart. =/
    I'm really not a fan but, it obviously has a following so.

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