Rorus Raz wrote: »
There's also the possibility you just can't really grow a bear like other guys.
Angel_of_Bacon wrote: »
Not even BEAR vaginas can defeat me!
cakemikz wrote: »
And then I rub actual cake on myself.
Loomdun wrote: »
thats why you have chest helmets
I know this isn't writer's block, but the first bubble on the page seems overly expositional. Obviously he's an instructor, so exposition may be his middle name, but each character should strive to have a unique voice. That first line is just a very simplistic explanation that feels like it's coming directly from the writer and not through the vessel of a developed character.
I'm sure its been mentioned. But the one thing seriously holding this back for me is the choice of font.
Nappuccino wrote: »
Is your illustrator image much larger than the final one? that could lead to the text problems...