Guy Bell wrote: »
1. I couldn't figure out what was distracting me on your pages and then I realized it was the spacing in between your panels. Your horizontals are much wider than your verticals. This may be intentional but they are normally the same width.
Also, keep in mind that I'm much more in the "comic book" camp than the "graphic novel" camp.
Mace1370 wrote: »
I just updated the bubbles to have rounded corners. I still think a few corners are tight and I'll work more on them later, but I think it's an improvement.
Dee, should I border the bubbles with a gray? Other than that, I'm not sure what I could do to make them meld in more.
Uterus, do your thing!