So I'm working on a comic to try to get my drawing/inking/layout skills back up to snuff... and the best way for me to do that is to know what all I need to work on. Here's a sample of my work so far...
The main things I know are not very good are, well, the inking. For the life of me I just can't seem to understand line thickness and all that cool stuff. As well as the backgrounds... not nearly enough detail there. I'm semi-happy with the cartoony anatomy, but I'm sure with a little help I could improve that. Especially in the hands department (well, that's more practice than anything). So, well, rip it to shreds. Tell me what you think, and I'll try to improve it. Also, I have a second little strip in the works, so hopefully I'll be able to incorporate any criticism in that one.
Oh, and yes, that is suppose to be the 24 t-shirt. No, it's not very well modeled.
No I don't.