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Limp [DOODLE]

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  • LoomdunLoomdun Registered User
    edited June 2009
    dang, i'll fix that shortly



    any other crits

    It's a simple mistake ;p you merely took the side of the torso and connected it to the front part

    design.jpg

    Also yah the legs are to long and they feel like the pants were drawn there without any thinking of the leg under it

    Heres it without the person over it

    design2.jpg

    (I also adjusted the feet yours were a tad flat)

    oops and quoting melting doll

    edit: Also I really don't like the posture of the legs, i'm going to see if I can do something for that.

    design3.jpg

    there yah goooooooo orik

    also because I have so much free time being summer I also decided to push the form more

    design3-1.jpg
    GabbyBookmark.jpg

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    splat
  • LeggraphicsLeggraphics Registered User
    edited June 2009
    sheesha rat his arms are stiff but meh
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  • beavotronbeavotron Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    melting doll: fantastic.

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  • brokecrackerbrokecracker Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Meh...


    Untitled-1.jpg

    I'm not really digging anything I do recently...if ever.

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  • F87F87 So Say We All Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Why don't you dig it?

    Ok, here is an environment wip, please critique!

    envwip1.jpg

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  • DelzhandDelzhand Hard to miss. Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Is that a totally awesome giant skull or a totally awesome busted up cadillac on the horizon?

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  • F87F87 So Say We All Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Haha, it's a skull, but I see the Cadillac now. Thanks.

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  • MykonosMykonos Registered User
    edited June 2009
    love the colors F, but if that skull is meant to be something of more importance i would place a bit more emphasis to make it pop out more, i didn't even notice it until second glance. Also the water near the forground needs to be more reflective of the sky. Other than that keep it up.

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  • F87F87 So Say We All Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Thanks Myk, Here is an update, I didn't work on the water too much, but I think the skull reads a little better now.

    envwip2.jpg

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  • ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    did another one of these. this time on my back porch, from my grill.

    060109.jpg

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  • earthwormadamearthwormadam ancient crust Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    hey pretty cool

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  • GurtPerkGurtPerk Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    real quick doodle between personal projects and summer work.

    quickfacedoodle.jpg

    hope to post more later.

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  • MykonosMykonos Registered User
    edited June 2009
    quick personal sketch

    Echaracterart.jpg

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    "I was born; six gun in my hand; behind the gun; I make my final stand"~Bad Company
  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    So, this came out a whole lot more phallic than intended.

    pink-new-500.jpg

    pink-new-close.jpg

    I dunno, it makes me laugh.

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  • F87F87 So Say We All Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    It is rather phallic, and all the hands reaching to "rub" it help in that fact.

    But, besides that, its awesome! Really well done man.

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    I saw all the hands recoiling in disgust. But there you go, you sexy pervert.

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  • F87F87 So Say We All Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Haha, I see that now. Either way, this is your sexiest painting YET!

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    I need a creature for my portfolio! So, thumbs!

    (Also, I'm going to use this creature (humanoid type) as a D&D 4.0 boss!)

    monster_thumbs.jpg

    EDIT:

    Also, update on my environment. Trying to finish it today, but meh. The ships suck still, and lots of places still need refinement.

    envwip3.jpg

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  • wakkawawakkawa Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Some things I'll never actually finish.
    stopit.jpg
    waitforme.jpg

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  • LoomdunLoomdun Registered User
    edited June 2009
    oooooh wakkawa you and your wemenz

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    which the rest of us wish you would

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  • F87F87 So Say We All Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Hey, don't do this to me, Wak!

    You know that if you post right after I do, you HAVE to critique my work, because the next 2 pages will be ooohs and aahhhhs about your womenz! (Which they def. deserve.. awesome work btw!)

    You gotta finish that Tsunade!

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  • MetalbourneMetalbourne Inside a cluster b personalityRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    That poison ivy looks like she has two different asses.

    the ass on the right looks really athletic. The one on the left looks really voluptuous.

    I'm sure it'd make an awesome sitcom, though.

    (I like the episode where sporty-ass got the hamster stuck in her mouth)

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  • TamTam Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    the one further away is less round

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  • ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    dr, that's the best painting i've seen from you yet. that's awesome.

    wak, draw more comic broads.

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  • F87F87 So Say We All Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    That poison ivy looks like she has two different asses.

    the ass on the right looks really athletic. The one on the left looks really voluptuous.

    I'm sure it'd make an awesome sitcom, though.

    (I like the episode where sporty-ass got the hamster stuck in her mouth)

    How long did you stare at the ass before you came up with that? haha

    Update: (I wanna call it finished)

    envwip4.jpg

    Edit, botlp, totp:
    wakkawa wrote: »
    Some things I'll never actually finish.
    stopit.jpg
    waitforme.jpg

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  • MetalbourneMetalbourne Inside a cluster b personalityRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    F87 wrote: »
    How long did you stare at the ass before you came up with that? haha

    Actually my critique of wakkawa's asses just sounded like the setup for a sitcom.

    Then I remembered there was a family guy episode of where they watched a sitcom about a (literally) giant ass.

    And Peter says "I like the episode where he got the hamster stuck in his mouth"

    That's why I threw it in there. Because I have this strange need to reference tv shows whenever I can.

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  • Radar6590Radar6590 Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Doing some value scale painting studies in a Drawing and Painting 1 class I'm taking over the summer. This is my fourth, but I kind of liked how it turned out. Oil on 9x12 paper.

    d6a1ef1430ce1d7062537909d65b6840.jpg

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    My DeviantArt
    Loomdun wrote: »
    ...And I am being hulked enraged by multiple things right now and I will destroy you
  • MKRMKR Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    It's often said that success is the product of a long series of failures.

    PyramidWorld.jpg

    I am stress-testing this theory.

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  • LeggraphicsLeggraphics Registered User
    edited June 2009
    wakka those pictures are prittyful

    f87 that environment looks noiice would maybe suggest adding shadows from those aircraft to give it more depth. I love the water up close with the reflection.

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  • NakedZerglingNakedZergling A more apocalyptic post apocalypse Portland OregonRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    chimera.jpg

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  • ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    very neat. i would've liked a better transition to and from the fur -but still, very neat.

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    wakka should stop blowing my mind, because my mind is almost entirely blown, and then he'll have to start blowing other areas.

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  • ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    despite digging the subject matter of the poison ivy one, it's one of the weakest of his so far. I think a lot of his appeal is in his unique palette.

    however, i always think his fingers are wonky looking.

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  • F87F87 So Say We All Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    yeah but the figure itself is still very well done. I was going to mention the fingers but it feels like a nit pick.

    I wish I could handle the female form that well, and I can HANDLE a FEMALE let me tell you what!

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  • desperaterobotsdesperaterobots perth, ausRegistered User regular
    edited June 2009
    Women!

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  • ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    yeah, the only reason i brought it up was because i've noticed similar treatment of the fingers in much of his past work.

    i'd love to see ivy (or any other licensed character that i care about) done in his normal palette though.

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  • XALXAL Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    I don't see anything wrong with the fingers...

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  • wakkawawakkawa Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    The hands aren't quite done yet, so I'll try to get them to look right, haha.

    Also, thanks for the crits on the butt. I knew something was wrong with it, but just couldn't figure it out.

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  • ManonvonSuperockManonvonSuperock Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    rad. it's mainly the pinky nub sticking out of the side of her hand that I think is throwing it off.

    how is lulu for your book? if you don't mind me asking, how much do you make off the cover price? I've heard that the profit margin through them is ridiculously low.

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  • F87F87 So Say We All Registered User regular
    edited June 2009
    I don't want to make a new thread for my finished enviro, but what do you guys think? Can I get a little more feedback, anyone?

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